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Oct 06th 2011 22:06 club activities dance school
Today, I had club activities. We practiced so hard, because we will dance in school festival! After club activities, I and my hiphop friends went to convinience store. We bought 'Nikuman (meat bun?)', because we were so hungry:(
Tomorrow, 3 my university friends will come my house and eat dinner together! I'm very looking forward to it;)
Naomi ナオミ
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 07th 2011 01:24
  • We practiced so hard, because we will dance in school festival!

  • We practiced so really hard, because we will be dancing in the school festival!

 
  • After club activities, I and my hiphop friends went to convinience store.

  • After club activities, I and my hiphop friends went to a convinience convenience store.

 
  • Tomorrow, 3 my university friends will come my house and eat dinner together!

  • Tomorrow, 3 of my university friends will come to my house and we will eat dinner together!

 
  • I'm very looking forward to it;)

  • I'm very really looking forward to it;)

 
Good job! Your English is great, there's just a few minor things here and there :) keep up the awesome work!
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