Statement of Purpose
I will send this letter to the University i will apply for.
Please help me with grammer errors, sentence structure and so on.
Statement of Purpose
My name is Tanka and I’m currently on my third year studying Vehicle engineering at XXXXXXX in Sweden, for my fourth year I wish to study abroad in Korea.
The reason why I want to study abroad is because it’s a valuable experience to have and I want to see the subject I’m studying in a broader, more international perspective. It would be nice with a change of environment and experience a different culture. It’s also a good opportunity to learn a third language.
I want to study at KAIST because it’s highly recognized in Asia and well-spoken of.
I have an Interest in learning another language, but I didn’t know which one I would go for so I began studying German. I thought that would be a good choice for monetary reasons and because it has a lot in common with Swedish, but I didn’t really enjoy it that much. I’ve had my eyes on Korean for a while and when I decided that I wanted to study abroad going to Korea seemed like the natural choice. I have been studying Korean on my own for a couple of months now, it’s a lot of fun and I’m highly motivated to learn more. In addition to my normal subjects I would like to take a Korean language curse also.
I haven’t decided yet what type of master I’m going to choose so I’ve taken some extra curses in electronics and programming so I can choose from a wider range of subjects.
I’m looking forward to new experiences and meeting new people.
Please help me with grammer errors, sentence structure and so on.
Statement of Purpose
My name is Tanka and I’m currently on my third year studying Vehicle engineering at XXXXXXX in Sweden, for my fourth year I wish to study abroad in Korea.
The reason why I want to study abroad is because it’s a valuable experience to have and I want to see the subject I’m studying in a broader, more international perspective. It would be nice with a change of environment and experience a different culture. It’s also a good opportunity to learn a third language.
I want to study at KAIST because it’s highly recognized in Asia and well-spoken of.
I have an Interest in learning another language, but I didn’t know which one I would go for so I began studying German. I thought that would be a good choice for monetary reasons and because it has a lot in common with Swedish, but I didn’t really enjoy it that much. I’ve had my eyes on Korean for a while and when I decided that I wanted to study abroad going to Korea seemed like the natural choice. I have been studying Korean on my own for a couple of months now, it’s a lot of fun and I’m highly motivated to learn more. In addition to my normal subjects I would like to take a Korean language curse also.
I haven’t decided yet what type of master I’m going to choose so I’ve taken some extra curses in electronics and programming so I can choose from a wider range of subjects.
I’m looking forward to new experiences and meeting new people.
I will send this letter to the university I am applying to.
Please help me with grammatical errors, sentence structure and so on.
My name is Tanka, and I’m currently in my third year studying Vehicle Engineering at XXXXXXX in Sweden. For my fourth year I wish to study abroad in Korea.
The reason why I want to study abroad is because it’s a valuable experience to have, and I want to see the subject I’m studying in a broader, more international perspective.
It would be nice with a change of environment and to experience a different culture.
I want to study at KAIST because it’s a highly recognized university in Asia.
I have an interest in learning another language, but I didn’t know which one I would attempt, so I began studying German.
I’ve had my eyes on Korean for a while, and when I decided that I wanted to study abroad, going to Korea seemed like a natural choice.
I have been studying Korean on my own for a couple of months now. It’s a lot of fun, and I’m highly motivated to learn more.
In addition to the standard curriculum, I would like to take a Korean language course also.
I haven’t decided yet what type of master's degree I’m going to choose. I've taken some extra courses in electronics and computer programming, so I can choose from a wider range of subjects.