Choice is always good.

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Apr 28, 2012 22:14
Today, I felt a little bit sadness. My sister is acting as a business person and is living with and carering my mother. But and so, my returnig home is annoiyance for her. But I had to meet my mother because my wife,s father said to me that a parent is always worrying his child. I took my best choice.
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Apr 28, 2012 22:25
  • Today, I felt a little bit sadness.

  • Today, I felt a little bit sad.

 
  • My sister is acting as a business person and is living with and carering my mother.

  • While my sister is working as a business person, she is also living with and taking care of my mother.

 
  • But and so, my returnig home is annoiyance for her.

  • Because of this, when I return home it is an annoyance for her.

 
  • But I had to meet my mother because my wife,s father said to me that a parent is always worrying his child.

  • But I had to visit my mother because my father-in-law said to me that a parent is always worrying his child.

 
  • I took my best choice.

  • So, I decided that seeing her was the best option.

 

Very good. The main part of what you were writing came across easily. I mostly made little corrections and some that just made it sound more natural.

Apr 28, 2012 23:24 besutti-e
Thank you for correctig my letters. Saying like that is first time. You are kind, I think so.
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