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- I walked with my dog. 私は犬と一緒に散歩しました。
I walked with my dog. 私は犬と一緒に散歩しました。
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It is sometimes fine today in Yamaguchi.
今日は、山口はときどき晴れでした。
My dog is labrador Retriever.
私の犬はラブラドールレトリーバーです。
I love dogs!
私は犬が大好きです。
She is 10 years old.
彼女は10歳です。
I always walk half of an hour.
いつも30分ぐらい歩きます。
My dog tired early.
うちの犬は疲れるのが早いです。
I'm worrying.
心配しています。
I have grown a Japanese midget Shiba before.
以前、Japanese midget Shiba(柴犬)を育てたことがあります。
She was dead 16 years old.
16歳で死んでしまいました。
I hope good health.
私は犬が健康であることが願いです。
But Appetite is very good.
でも、食欲だけはとてもあります^^
今日は、山口はときどき晴れでした。
My dog is labrador Retriever.
私の犬はラブラドールレトリーバーです。
I love dogs!
私は犬が大好きです。
She is 10 years old.
彼女は10歳です。
I always walk half of an hour.
いつも30分ぐらい歩きます。
My dog tired early.
うちの犬は疲れるのが早いです。
I'm worrying.
心配しています。
I have grown a Japanese midget Shiba before.
以前、Japanese midget Shiba(柴犬)を育てたことがあります。
She was dead 16 years old.
16歳で死んでしまいました。
I hope good health.
私は犬が健康であることが願いです。
But Appetite is very good.
でも、食欲だけはとてもあります^^
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It was partially sunny today in Yamaguchi.
I always walk for half an hour.
My dog gets tired early.
I have raised a Japanese midget Shiba before.
She when she was 16.
I hope my dog has good health. I hope my dog is healthy. (<-- Sounds more natural.)
But it's appetite is very good.
In the US we just call those dogs Shiba Inu, I think. :) I hope your dog stays healthy, too.
添削ありがとうございました。
Thanks for your comments.
It is partially sunny today in Yamaguchi.
My dog is a Labrador Retriever.
My dog is a female, and she is 10 years old. (who is "she" referring to? :)
I always walk her for half an hour.
My dog gets tired early.
I'm starting to worry.
I have raised a Japanese miniature Shiba before.
She died when she was 16 years old.
I hope my dog will have good health.
However, her appetite is very good. (it's tempting, but try not to start a sentence with "but" :)
Nice job!
Mostly corrected you on making your journal sound more natural :).
Also, try not to start with the word "but" in a sentence, in this case, you can use "Also," or "However,".
Hope that helped.
がんばって!