Today's topic is ''Cycling''
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I love cycling.I got road bike last my birth day.So I have ridden bicycle everyday.When I go to school I rode this bike for a hour distance of 15km one way.
So far I have ridden long distance,among those I went from Kyoto to Osaka.Travel distance is 122km.It was so tired.But I got a feeling achivement.Then I went and loaded folded my bike on bus from Tokyo to Kyoto by night bus.
In the morning,I arrived at Kyoto.And I went around various sightseeing spot by bike.Most impressive place is old coffee shop.It have stood there since 71 years ago.Surprisingly this coffee taste is unchanged from establishment.It tasted really good.
Then,I left from Kyoto and went toword through Nara to Osaka.However it was painful way.In order to reach Osaka,I had to climb hill.It was very hard.In Arrived at Osaka,it was dark.
But I enjoyed this trip,because I love cycling.
P.S. I often use ''I'' when I write diary.Too many...What should I do?
So far I have ridden long distance,among those I went from Kyoto to Osaka.Travel distance is 122km.It was so tired.But I got a feeling achivement.Then I went and loaded folded my bike on bus from Tokyo to Kyoto by night bus.
In the morning,I arrived at Kyoto.And I went around various sightseeing spot by bike.Most impressive place is old coffee shop.It have stood there since 71 years ago.Surprisingly this coffee taste is unchanged from establishment.It tasted really good.
Then,I left from Kyoto and went toword through Nara to Osaka.However it was painful way.In order to reach Osaka,I had to climb hill.It was very hard.In Arrived at Osaka,it was dark.
But I enjoyed this trip,because I love cycling.
P.S. I often use ''I'' when I write diary.Too many...What should I do?
I got road bike last my birth day.I got a road bike for my last birthday.
When I go to school I rode ride this bike for a hour for a distance of 15km one way
So far, I have ridden long distances,among those the one I went took from Kyoto to Osaka.
Travel The distance travelled was is 122km.
It was so tiring. OR I was so tired.
But I got a feeling of achivement.
Then I went and loaded my folded my bike onto the night bus from Tokyo to Kyoto by night bus.
And I went around various sightseeing spots by bike.
Most The most impressive place is old coffee shop.
It have has stood there since for 71 years ago.
Surprisingly, this coffee taste is unchanged from establishment since the shop first opened.
Then,I left from Kyoto and went toword through Nara to Osaka.
However it was painful way route.
In order to reach Osaka,I had to climb a hill.
In Arrived On arriving at Osaka,it was dark.
I often use ''I'' when I write my diary.
Best wishes
I got a road bike last my birth day for my last birthday. ('Road bike' is ok, but 'Bicycle' by itself sounds better.)
So I have ridden my bicycle everyday.
When I go to school I rode ride this bike for an hour, with a distance of 15km one way.
So far I have ridden long distances, among those I went from Kyoto to Osaka.
The travel distance is 122km.
But I got a feeling sense of achivement achievement.
Then I went and loaded and folded my bike on onto the night bus from Tokyo to Kyoto by night bus.
In the morning, I arrived at in Kyoto.
And I went around various sightseeing spots by bike.
The most impressive place is the old coffee shop.
It have has stood there since for 71 years ago.
Surprisingly this coffee taste is unchanged from the establishments.
Then, I left from Kyoto and went toword towards Osaka through Nara to Osaka.
However it was a painful way.
In order to reach Osaka, I had to climb a hill.
In Arrived When I arrived at in Osaka, it was dark.
I often use ''I'' when I write my diary.
Too many... I use it too much.
If you think you use 'I' too much, try using other subjects, such as 'he', 'she' or 'it', or try using different grammar structures.
I got a road bike for my last birthday.
So I have ridden my bicycle (for consistency, write "road bike" or simply, "it") everyday.
So far I have ridden long distances; (either use a semicolon or a period) among those I went from Kyoto to Osaka.
But I got a feeling ("feeling" is good, "sense" is more native) of achievement.
However, it was painful.
「I」を使う文章が多くある場合には「、」で文章を繋がれると思いますが、入りすぎないように使ってみてください。ただ「、」を使いっぱなしで混乱してしまうことが出てくるかもしれないですから、ちゃんと考えて注意してくださいね!
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http://lang-8.com/305442/journals/1176715/Today%2527s-topic-is-%2527%2527Museum%2527%2527