Happy Time

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Aug 9, 2012 00:09
My dinner was delicious and fun.
I ate it with my friend.
We talked many things.
This time made us happy.
I love those happy times.
幸福な時間
私は美味しくて楽しい夕食の時間を過ごしました。
私は友人と一緒に食べました。
私たちは色々なことを話しました。
私たちはとても幸せな時間を過ごしました。
私はこの様な幸せな時間が大好きです。
rzemieślnik pióra
Thank you for your correction!
Aug 9, 2012 01:24
  • My dinner was delicious and fun.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • I ate it with my friend.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • We talked many things.

  • We talked about many things.

    I think it sounds a bit more natural.

 
  • This time made us happy.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 

Your English is good, I think there are no mistakes to correct! :)

Aug 9, 2012 11:53 usa
Thank you for helping me.
about many things.. I see.
I will learn your kind correction.

WoW～ Your comment is very sweet (*^^*)
I'm very happy!
Have a happy day (^o^)/
green
Aug 9, 2012 03:22

>私たちはとても幸せな時間を過ごしました。
>This time made us happy.
or 'We had a really good time' might be what i'd say

Aug 9, 2012 11:56 usa
Thank you for helping me *^^*
We had a really good time.. I see.
I understood it.
I will learn your kind correction.

Thank you (^o^)/
Have a happy day!
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