Sadness
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Today I went to my university with my mother,to prepare for my new term
I also went to the library to put some books for my certificates and TOEFL,But I felt very sad,because some of my friends went away(maybe they become postgraduates or not,which means I couldn't see them anymore==)I still remember last term we went over books together,and the library is the warmest place for us to stay in ^^
I will meet new friends in library,it is not a bad thing but I need time to adapt it,time flies quickly,I couldn't catch it !!!!
I also went to the library to put some books for my certificates and TOEFL,But I felt very sad,because some of my friends went away(maybe they become postgraduates or not,which means I couldn't see them anymore==)I still remember last term we went over books together,and the library is the warmest place for us to stay in ^^
I will meet new friends in library,it is not a bad thing but I need time to adapt it,time flies quickly,I couldn't catch it !!!!
I also went to the library to put some books for my certificates and TOEFL,But I felt very sad,because some of my friends went away are gone(maybe they have become postgraduates or not,which means I can't see them anymore==)I still remember last term we went when over books together,and the library was the warmest place for us to stay in ^^
I will meet new friends in the library,it is not a bad thing but I need time to adapt it,time flies quickly,I can't catch up with it !!!!
Today I went to my university with my mother, to prepare for my new term.
I also went to the library to read some books for my certificates and TOEFL examinations, but I felt very sad, because some of my friends are gone. Maybe they have become postgraduates or not, which means I can't see them anymore. I still remember the last term when we went through the books together, not to mention the library is the warmest place for us to stay in. ^^
I will make new friends in the library. I guess it's not a bad thing but I need time to adjust. Time flies like an arrow, I can't catch up with it !!!! c( >_______< )o
2) I didn't quiet understand the "put some books for my certificates and TOEFL". Using the word "put" in my opinion is...that you're returning the library books back.
Furthermore, to "put some books for my certificates and TOEFL" doesn't sound clear. Therefore I changed "put" to "read". Assuming that you are studying for your TOEFL examinations to obtain certificates.
Also I put "examinations", in case people who don't take the test or unaware of the abbreviation "TOEFL".
3) I've modified some words because the previous correction someone made didn't make any sense to me. If I missed any out, feel free to point it out.
4) I've put two English idioms "not to mention" and "Time flies like an arrow" so in future cases, you can use them. If you want to know how to use them, let me know.
5) You said "meet new friends in library". I wouldn't say "meet" but rather "make new friends". You want friends, right? Though if you said "meet" then you can say:
"I will meet new people in the library". That's how I interpret it.
Hope you pass your TOEFL with flying colors and party afterwards.