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Aug 08th 2011 23:39
It was very hot today in Kyoto. When I rode a bicycle,I sweat a lot.
This summer, I sweat more than last summer!
I'm not good at high temperature,but fruits are very delicious in summer,so I'm happy. Especially , I'm looking forward to eating peach every year.
Enjoy summer!
Annette
Thank you for your correction!
Aug 11th 2011 23:18
  • summer

  • Summer

 
  • It was very hot today in Kyoto.

  • It was a very hot today in Kyoto.

 
  • When I rode a bicycle,I sweat a lot.

  • When I rode a my bicycle, I sweat a lot.

 
  • This summer, I sweat more than last summer!

  • This summer, I sweat more than last summer!

 
  • I'm not good at high temperature,but fruits are very delicious in summer,so I'm happy.

  • I'm not good at with high temperatures, but fruits are very delicious in summer, so I'm happy.

 
  • Especially , I'm looking forward to eating peach every year.

  • Especially , I'm especially looking forward to eating peach every year.

 
  • Enjoy summer!

  • Enjoy summer!

 
Good job. I like peaches too.
Aug 12th 2011 00:24 hrm
Thank you!
Thank you for your correction!
Nov 20th 2011 13:00
  • When I rode a bicycle,I sweat a lot.

  • When I ride a bicycle, I sweat a lot.

 
:-}
Nov 20th 2011 14:23 hrm
Thank you very much! ^_^
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