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I met our new ALT yesterday！

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Apr 14th 2012 05:18
At last,I could meet our new ALT!
Honestly speaking,He was not cooler than I considered. lol

I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

I want to go to study abroad some day.
nasadigital
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 14th 2012 05:34
  • Honestly speaking,He was not cooler than I considered.

  • Honestly speaking, He wasn't cooler than what I imagined him to be.

    Sounds better this way.

 
  • I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

  • I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

    I think it's not wrong to leave the "a" there, but it sounds more natural this way.

 
Hope this helps.
I'm glad you met your new ALT and I'd also like to study in japan some day :P
Apr 14th 2012 05:59 Tarobee
Thank you!
Japan is a beautiful country.

ALTは近くで見るとそんなにかっこよく見えませんでしたlolol
mari36
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 14th 2012 05:52
  • I met our new ALT yesterday！

  • I met our new ALT yesterday!

 
  • At last,I could meet our new ALT!

  • At last, I got to meet our new ALT!

    This is more natural

 
  • Honestly speaking,He was not cooler than I considered.

  • Honestly speaking, he was not as cool as I had expected.

 
  • I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

  • I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

 
Apr 14th 2012 06:00 Tarobee
Thank you!
Your correct is so good!

Andromeda
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 14th 2012 06:06
  • At last,I could meet our new ALT!

  • At last, I finally meet our new ALT!

 
  • Honestly speaking,He was not cooler than I considered.

  • Honestly speaking, he was not as cool as I thought.

 
  • I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

  • I hear that his girlfriend is a Japanese.

 
  • I want to go to study abroad some day.

  • I want to go to study abroad some day.

 
Give the guy a break. It's gotta be hard being a Justin Bieber impersonator in a foreign country. :P
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