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Are the tenses in this paragraph used correctly?

Suddenly I thought. If those children had not been adopted by the monks, now perhaps they would be wandering along the streets, temporari...
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Jun 29, 2012 20:08
Mikyo

English With native lang

Can I write "The image of the orphans at Bo De Temple lingered in my mind" ? I met some orphans at Bo De Temple, and I want to...
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Jun 29, 2012 13:38
Mikyo

Does this sentence make sense?

"However, the children at Bo De Temple are more lucky than other orphans, that they are not only taken care of and protected but als...
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Jun 26, 2012 13:17
Mikyo

My summer volunteer work ( Please correct this essay for me! )

I have two months of summer vacation before entering the senior year. The senior year is always a difficult time because students must ...
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Jun 25, 2012 19:57