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子供の環境は子供達の知識や生活を響く。環境は刺激的ならば刺激的ほど、子供達が成長して学ぶ。それに、愛情や注目をたくさんもらえば、もっと速く学べると言われている。その時に、環境で感情を表現するのことやストレスに対処するのことを学ぶ。研究によると、いい環境で育てた子供達の方はIQが高い。それに、その子供達の方が勢が高くて、脳活動が多いい。しかし、子供が消極的な環境に住んでいるると、そんなことを学べなって、脳がちゃんと伸ばせない。子供が認知や社会的や行動の問題になるかもしれない。環境が改めたら、認知の手腕も社会的の問題が普通で良くなれるが、行動の問題、例えば攻撃的な行動が一般的に直し難しいと言われている。

それに、遊ぶのことは特に成長するために大切である。子供時代中に玩具で様々な技能を学ぶ。幼児期のとき、玩具が根本的な技能を伸ばす。例えば、ボールと遊ぶと、子供達が運動スキルを伸ばす。ブロックの玩具、例えばレゴで遊ぶと、目と手の協応を伸ばす。子供は玩具やゲームで脳が伸ばす。玩具と遊んだら、簡単な科学や数学、例えば形のことやナンバーのことや因果のことを学ぶ。年を取ると、もっと複雑なゲームをして、戦略や計画をし方を学ぶ。それに、自転車やブランコで遊べば、筋肉やスタミナを強くなる。子供たちは玩具やゲームで交際術も学ぶ。子供達が一緒に遊んだら、友達を作ってコミュニケーションの技能を伸ばす。そして、ゲームをしたら、チームワークや創造を使い方を学ぶ。ゲームを負けるのに、子供はストレスに対照し方を学ぶので、遊ぶことはとても有益である。

子供の成長のために強化も大事なことである。強化と言うのは行儀を帰るために褒美と処罰のことである。研究によると、いい行儀を褒美すればいいと言われている。理由は、子供が称賛をもらえば、称賛をまたもらいたいので頑張る。それに、褒美や称賛をもらえば子供がうれしくなって、両親といい関係を作る。研究によると、称賛の方が処罰より一貫して行儀を生ずる。

そのように両親や他の大人は子供の成長に大きな影響を与えるので子供のためにいい環境を与えるべきである。

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コメント：Hello! This is a paper for my Japanese class. I would really appreciate it if you can provide corrections~. Thank you so much in advance!! ^^

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英語バージョン

Childhood is a very important time for development. According to the World Health Organization, the time from infancy to about eight years old is a period of rapid growth. During this time, children learn various things such as language, social skills, and self-awareness. If they do not learn these things properly in their infancy, people may experience problems including mental illness and heart disease. Additionally, people develop their personality and interests during childhood. Therefore, early childhood education is very important for children.

A child’s environment affects children’s knowledge and personality. The more stimulating an environment, the more children develop and learn. Additionally, it is said that children learn more quickly if they receive a lot of love and attention. According to research, children who were raised in a good environment had higher IQ scores. In addition, they were taller and had more brain activity. However, if one lives in a negative environment, he cannot learn these things and his brain does not properly develop. The child may develop cognitive, social, or behavioral problems. Although cognitive ability and social problems can usually be improved if the child’s environment becomes better, behavioral problems such as aggression are difficult to fix.

Playing is especially important for children to develop. Throughout childhood, children learn various skills through their toys. For instance, if children play with a ball, they develop their motor skills. If children play with blocks such as Lego, they will develop hand-eye coordination. Additionally, if they play on bikes or swings, their muscles and stamina become stronger. Children develop their brains through games and toys. If children play with toys, they learn about simple math and physics such as shapes, numbers, and cause and effect relationships. As they grow older, they can play more complicated games and learn strategy and how to plan. Children also learn social skills through toys and games. If children play together, they make friends and develop communication skills. Additionally, if they play games, they learn teamwork and how to use their imaginations.

Reinforcement is also important for child development. Reinforcement is the use of rewards and punishment to change behavior. Research has said that rewarding good behavior is good for a child. The reason is that if children receive praise, they will work hard because they want to be praised again. Additionally, if a child receives rewards and praise, he builds a good relationship with his parents. According to research, praise yields more consistent behavior than punishment.

Because parents and other adults have a big effect on a child’s development, parents should provide a good environment for the sake of their children.

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新しい言葉

世界保健機関・せかいほけんきかん・World Health Organization
幼児期・ようじき・Infancy
急速・きゅうそく・Rapid
成長・せいちょう・Growth to adulthood
交際術・こうさいじゅつ・Social skills
自覚・じかく・Self awareness
環境・かんきょう・Environment, circumstances
幼少期・ようしょうき・Early childhood
幼児教育・ようじきょういく・Early childhood education
含める・ふくめる・To include
精神病・せいしんびょう・Mental illness
心臓病・しんぞうびょう・Heart disease
伸ばす・のばす・To develop
刺激的・しげきてき・Stimulating
注目・ちゅうもく・Attention
響く・ひびく・Affect
感情・かんじょう・Emotion
対処・たいしょ・To cope with
消極的・しょうきょくてき・Negative, passive
認知・にんち・Cognitive
社会的・しゃかいてき・Social
行動・こうどう・Behavioral
脳活動・のうかつどう・Brain activity
改める・あらためる・To change or mend
攻撃的・こうげきてき・Aggressive
栄養・えいよう・Nutrition
技能・ぎのう・ Skills
根本的・こんぱんてき・Basic
運動スキル・うんどうすきる・Motor skills
目と手の協応・Hand-eye coordination
創造・そうぞう・Imagination
有益・ゆうえき・Beneficial
複雑・ふくざつ・Complex
戦略・せんりゃく・Strategy
計画・けいかく・Plan
強化・きょうか・Reinforcement
褒美・ほうび・Reward
処罰・しょばつ・Punishment
行儀・ぎょうぎ・Behavior
称賛・しょうさん・Praise
一貫して・いっかんして・Consistently
生ずる・しょうずる・To yield

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ソース

http://www.who.int/mediacentre/factsheets/fs332/en/index.html
http://www.factsforlifeglobal.org/03/
http://www.guardian.co.uk/science/2006/feb/18/medicineandhealth.lifeandhealth
http://www.learningtimenow.com/parenting-tips/92-early-childhood-development-how-important-play-is-for-your-childs-development
http://www.child-development-guide.com/child-development-play.html
http://www.adoptionarticlesdirectory.com/Article/Why-Toys-are-Important-for-a-Child-s-Development/83491
http://www.kidsmakingchange.com/Positive_Reinforcement/cms/Positive_Reinforcement.html
http://www.aish.com/f/p/48931157.html

Posted at Sun Apr 24 00:33:09 UTC 2011
]]> http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/900813 http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/900813 akemi Sun Apr 24 00:33:09 UTC 2011
어제 공포 영화를 처음으로 봤습니다~! 착신아리를 보기전에 덜 무서운 공포 영화를 보고 싶었습니다. 친구들을 물었을 때 인형사라는 한국 영화를 추천했습니다. 친구는 일본의 공포 영화은 진짜 무섭지만 한국의 공포 영화가 별로 무섭지 않다고 말했습니다. 그래서, 어제 인형사를 보기로 했습니다.

昨日ホラー映画を初めて見ました～！「着信あり」を見る前に、「着信あり」より怖いホラー映画を見てみたかったです。友達に聞いた時、「人形師」と言う韓国語の映画を進めました。友達は日本のホラー映画がとても怖いですけど、韓国のホラー映画があまり怖くないようにと言いました。だから昨日「人形師」を見ることにしました。

Yesterday I watched a horror movie for the first time. Before watching One Missed Call, I wanted to watch a horror movie that was less scary. When I asked my friends, they recommended a Korean movie called The Doll Master. They told me that Japanese horror movies are really scary, but Korean horror movies aren't that scary. So, yesterday I decided to watch The Doll Master.

친구들은 이 영화가 무섭지 않다고 말했지만 공포 영화를 본 적이 없어서 혼자 보기가 조금 어려웠습니다. ㅠㅠ 그래도 마침내 예쁘고 재미있다고 생각 했습니다. 그리고 결말은 조금 슬펐습니다.

友達はこの映画が怖くないように言いましたけど、ホラー映画を見たことがなかったので一人で見るのが難しかったです。でも結局、きれいで面白い映画だと思いました。そして、結びはちょっと悲しかったです。

My friends told me that this movie wasn't scary, but since I had never seen a horror film before, it was kind of hard to watch it alone. But in the end, I thought it was a pretty and interesting movie. The ending was also a little sad.

그래도 부작용이 하나 있습니다. 어제 전에 인형을 별로 좋아하지 않았지만 이제 싫어합니다 ㅎㅎㅎ

でも、副作用が一つあります。昨日前に人形があまり好きじゃなかったが、今嫌いです！ｗ

But there was one side effect. Before yesterday, I didn't really care for dolls, but now I really don't like them.

어쩌면 다음에 더 무서운 영화를 볼수 있습니다...(사실은 공포 영화를 아직 잘 볼 수 없다고 생각 합니다 ㅠㅠ)

多分、今度もっと怖い映画を見ることが出来るかもしれません・・・（実はまだホラー映画を見られないと思います・・・）

Maybe next time I can watch a scarier movie.... (Actually I think I still can't watch horror movies TT)

Posted at Sun Mar 13 19:54:59 UTC 2011
]]> http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/846913 http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/846913 akemi Sun Mar 13 19:54:59 UTC 2011 Classes start on Thursday.
Wish me luck!
I'll post a new journal soon.

Posted at Sat Sep 20 17:46:44 UTC 2008
]]> http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/25403 http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/25403 akemi Sat Sep 20 17:46:44 UTC 2008
I have a question about how to use 은/는 & 이/가 properly~.
So far no one can explain it to me.
I'm really confused, because everyone says something different.

This is what my book says:

이 and 가
The particles 이 and 가 determine the subject of a sentence that depicts an action. EXAMPLE: 음식이 맛있습니다. The food is delicious. 한국어 재미있습니다. Korean is fun.

은 and 는
The particles 은 and 는 follow the topic noun of a description sentence. The topic noun is the noun that the sentence describes. EXAMPLE: 마이클은 키가 작습니다. Michael is small. 정호는 키가 큽니다. Jeong-Ho is tall.

However, I think 음식이 맛있습니다. and 한국어 재미있습니다. are not sentences that depict action at all -_-; Aren't you describing food and Korean??? haha ;; It's kind of difficult.

My friends all say different things, like it depends on the sentence, or이 and 가 is mostly used for food, or things like that. However, no one can give me a clear answer! T_T

Please help me out~
Answers in English please ^^;;

Posted at Fri Aug 22 06:38:36 UTC 2008
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木曜日に友達と彩冷えるのライブを見ました！
とても楽しかったです～。
葵さんのパラパラは可愛かった。
バンドは本当に上手・・・＾＾

ライブのあとに、彩冷えるはサイン会をしました。
でも、２０＄を払わなければいけませんでした。
そして、もしサインをもらいたいなら、
１５＄のポスターを買わなければいけませんでした。
高すぎまーす！！！
だから、友達とフェンスの後ろで見ました。
私はインテツさんに手を振って、インテツさんは笑いました＾＾
そして、友達と夢人さんと葵さんに手を振りました。（゜▽゜）ノツ
夢人さんと葵さんも手を振りました～！＾＾
でも、ケンゾとタケヒトは私を見ませんでした(ノ゜△゜)ノ

コンサートは楽しかったけど、皆はちょっと怖かったです・・・
怖い女は私がカッコイイ男だと思いました!　( >o<)~ノ

女：　(⌒.−)＝★ Hey~♡
私：　ﾔﾀﾞo(>ﾛﾛ<)oﾔﾀﾞﾔﾀﾞ

I'll write about this in Korean soon >_<

Posted at Sat Jun 21 23:17:43 UTC 2008
]]> http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/13525 http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/13525 akemi Sat Jun 21 23:17:43 UTC 2008 あのう･･･ちょっと間違います。
一滴だけ飲みました（笑）
私のボイフレンドはソジュを勧めました。
でも、私は「だめ！」と言いました(笑)

ボイフレンドは「明美は飲まないと、僕は酔っ払います。」と言いました。
だから・・・投降しました （＝×＝）；
でも、カップで飲みませんでした。
却って、指がカップに入って、一滴を飲みました。

でも・・・とても不味かったです･･･!
ボイフレンドはソジュが好きですけど･･･
私は全然飲酒を飲めないだと思います！！（テ。テ）

（笑）

Posted at Sat Apr 19 05:37:38 UTC 2008
]]> http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/8677 http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/8677 akemi Sat Apr 19 05:37:38 UTC 2008 18才になりました。＾＾

오늘은 저의 생일 입니다.
18세에 됐어요.

Posted at Sun Apr 13 08:03:54 UTC 2008
]]> http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/8362 http://lang-8.com/2898/journals/8362 akemi Sun Apr 13 08:03:54 UTC 2008 試験は難しくなかったですけど、先生はTraffic Checkを見ませんでしたから、ほとんど失敗しました。（＠ｘ＠）；；
私は本当に安全に運転をします　OTL　ヤクソク
でも、まだ保険を持ちませんから、運転をしてもだめですー。

Posted at Thu Apr 03 06:52:11 UTC 2008
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