check this for me?

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Aug 15, 2011 14:05
I'm probably off by alot on this, sorry if i am, but would this be correct?

Watashi wa Tom-san ga omiage wo akemasu

do i need a diffrent verb.... or did i use the partical's wrong? did i put one to many in there? @.@ so many questions... Does it need arimasu to show exsistance?

Please help! :0