Help me !

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Aug 3, 2013 00:43
I have to submit my resume to a company that involves in English tomorrow.
So I really want you to check if my sentences are correct.
I'm sorry that I entry this kind of topic in spite of the fact that it's been a long time since I stayed away from Lang-8 >.<
Thank you in advance in your corporation.

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I’ve been studying English for almost 4 years to get a job related to a foreign language.
I believe that your company is the best for me to gain great experiences and sophisticated skills for life. It’s hard for me to say that I’ve already had a lot of experiences of practical English, but I have great passion to improve my skills and be help for your company. In addition I went to *** Institute of Technology and have considerable experiences to do office work so I’m confident that I can contribute your company with my career. Finally I’m familiar with the local geography because I lived in *** Ward before and I really like the environment around there. It will be a great pleasure if I work at the place where I lived once.
Thank you in advance for your consideration.