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Mar 22, 2012 06:54 Patience made 6 corrections for Starvation
Well done! I haven´t corrected your whole text, because it was quite long, but your English is really good. Keep up the good work.
Nov 6, 2011 19:42 卡梅尔 (Carmel) made 12 corrections for Dream
These days I can't remember much of what I dream, so I have decided to not even think about them! Saves me a lot of time :)
Nov 5, 2011 06:16 usa commented on Dream
I think that your journal is interesting!! You have a sweet Mother. We see many dreams. We can remember little parts of dreams. So I...
Oct 17, 2011 21:11 卡梅尔 (Carmel) made 18 corrections for Starvation
It would be good if it was as simple as this, wouldn't it?
Oct 13, 2011 19:28 卡梅尔 (Carmel) made 9 corrections for Obesity
Well written Sohail.
Oct 11, 2011 12:19 ying made 18 corrections for Obesity
Well written. Obesity is a huge (no joke intended) problem in my country.
Oct 11, 2011 12:01 usa commented on Obesity
It is difficult for me. So I think that only... "Health is wealth" are true. I have not exercised recently. I should exerc...
Oct 9, 2011 09:57 symphony made 18 corrections for Life
This was a pretty deep entry. I definitely agree with a lot of what you're saying, though. :) Nice job writing!
Oct 8, 2011 17:26 usa commented on Life
This is very difficult for me. I think that a life is mysterious too. But it is good that we help other people. Because it's make...
Oct 5, 2011 21:04 卡梅尔 (Carmel) made 5 corrections for welcome to every member of ...
Well written Sohail, strange no one has corrected it in all this time. Obviously there are not many people learning Urdu who have found t...