Mailing to fitness club because of membership fees

I used to go to the gym (only for 2 months ;) ) and stopped as I made a decision to finish my job.

I told the staff and they said yes.

I thought everything was done.

But when I checked my account today, my membership fees had still been charged.

It costs $42 for 2 weeks and it was charged three times after I told them.

So I called the fitness club.

However their internet connection was poor and they asked me to send an e-mail so that they could check it later.

Wait, their INTERNET connection was poor? I thought you called them? Do you mean their connection over the phone was poor?

I learned how to write mail but..

I forgot everything T_T

I am writing this to ask you to double check my membership and also to refund some fees that were mistakenly charged to my account.

I'll add more corrections than usual to 1. Make you sound awesome and 2. Get all the points across very clearly.

I was a member of 360 Fitness Club in Tamworth and my membership was supposed to be expire in February.

I told your staff that I wanted to end my membership in the middle of February (about the 2nd week or 3rd week ).

And During that time, because of bank problems, the membership fee had is failed to charge fee by debit card.

So, I paid about 17 dollars to cover the rest of the week.

(It was most likely for the period from the 14th ~ 20th, and it was the last day I went to gym )

Then, for the next two weeks, membership fees were supposed to be charged from my two week deposit.

But when I checked my bank account today, it had charged three times.

There shouldn't be a charge for 22/02/2012.

I haven't been to gym since I paid that $17 in February.

You can probably check it on your computer.

In fact, I'm not even living in Tamworth anymore.

Could you please check into these matters for me?

I look forward to your answer.

Sincerely,

Do you think they can understand what I'm saying?