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Aug 20th 2012 03:41
I think that I could study quite a lot yesterday although I cooked and talked to my wife on Skype. It's good for me that I have such a nice day that I think that I did my best. I'm reading "Memory Of Midnight" by Sidney Sheldon and it is easier than his "The Other Side Of Midnight" to read. I finished 150 pages and I have 250 pages to go. I'd like to finish it by the end of August and I think I can.

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Aug 22nd 2012 12:48
  • I think that I could study quite a lot yesterday although I cooked and talked to my wife on Skype.

  • I think that I was able to get a lot of studying done yesterday even though I cooked and talked to my wife on Skype.

    a bit more natural

 
  • It's good for me that I have such a nice day that I think that I did my best.

  • It's good for me that I have days like this where I feel like I did my best.

    more natural

 
  • I'm reading "Memory Of Midnight" by Sidney Sheldon and it is easier than his "The Other Side Of Midnight" to read.

  • I'm reading "Memory Of Midnight" by Sidney Sheldon and it is easier to read than his "The Other Side Of Midnight" to read.

 
  • I finished 150 pages and I have 250 pages to go.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • I'd like to finish it by the end of August and I think I can.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
The last 2 sentences could have commas before the "and"s but that's a very minor point. Always nice to have a productive day! :)
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