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Jul 13th 2012 04:59
Unlike last Tuesday, when I went to the dormitory to collect my laundry after work yesterday, they had been already completely dry. Meanwhile, the same as last Wednesday night, I corrected one of the friends entry written in Japanese last night, but I couldn't post it because of the error that I wrote in yesterday's entry. After it happened, I repeated "Damn it." I re-posted it this morning. Good grief.

Today is my final day of this week's work. I'm looking forward to having two-day holiday. This coming Sunday, four of the new Japanese volunteers are supposed to come to my house, and I'm going to explain various things concerning education in Vanuatu and "100math" activity. I'm going to serve some dish and drinks. I hope we will have a good time on Sunday.
パットリ
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 13th 2012 05:08
  • Unlike last Tuesday, when I went to the dormitory to collect my laundry after work yesterday, they had been already completely dry.

  • Unlike last Tuesday, when I went to the dormitory to collect my laundry after work yesterday, everything was completely dry.

 
  • Meanwhile, the same as last Wednesday night, I corrected one of the friends entry written in Japanese last night, but I couldn't post it because of the error that I wrote in yesterday's entry.

  • Meanwhile, just like last Wednesday night, I corrected one of my friends' entry last night, but I couldn't post it because I got the same error that I wrote about yesterday.

    more concise

 
  • After it happened, I repeated "Damn it." I re-posted it this morning.

  • After it happened, I once again said "Damn it!" I re-posted it this morning.

 
  • Today is my final day of this week's work.

  • Today is my last day of work this week.

    more natural

 
  • I'm looking forward to having two-day holiday.

  • I'm looking forward to having a two-day holiday.

 
  • This coming Sunday, four of the new Japanese volunteers are supposed to come to my house, and I'm going to explain various things concerning education in Vanuatu and "100math" activity.

  • This coming Sunday, four of the new Japanese volunteers are supposed to come to my house, and I'm going to explain various things concerning education in Vanuatu and "100math" activity.

 
  • I'm going to serve some dish and drinks.

  • I'm going to serve some food and drinks.

 
That sucks that you keep getting that error >.<
Jul 13th 2012 18:02 masa4
“

  • Meanwhile, just like last Wednesday night, I corrected one of my friends' entry last night, but I couldn't post it because I got the same error that I wrote about yesterday.

    more concise

”
"I got the same error that I wrote about yesterday"... I'd like to remember it.
Jul 13th 2012 18:06 masa4
“

  • Today is my last day of work this week.

    more natural

”
I wondered how I should write it. "Today is my last day of work this week."... I'd like to use it again.

Today, my last day of work this week was cushy.
Jul 13th 2012 18:08 masa4
“

  • I'm looking forward to having a two-day holiday.

”
Sorry, I made this kind of mistake again, though you had given me very good explanation. "a two-day holiday"... I must master it!!
Jul 14th 2012 01:25 パットリ
don't stress about your "errors" too much - your writing is still great :)
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