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Think about my 1 year aniversary

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Jun 15th 2012 21:06
I couldn't write my entry this morning, so I stop writing about yesterday's incident. June 23rd(Sat) is my 1 year anniversary since I came to Vanuatu. I'd like to celebrate by myself. Concretely, I'd like to spend about six hours of that day reading a book at my cafe and went to the airport at 6 pm.

Why would I like to go to the airport at that time? Because it was 6:10 pm when I came to Vanuatu, and I would like to remind the memory of my arrival. At the moment It was dark and rainy evening. I hope it wouldn't rain. After that, I'd like to go to a luxury restaurant.

Nevertheless, I'd like to appreciate everyone who is concerned with me on that wonderful anniversary. Tomorrow, I'm going to tell some waitress of my cafe about the anniversary. I'm looking forward to their response.
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Thank you for your correction!
Jun 18th 2012 04:52
  • Think about my 1 year aniversary

  • Thinking about my 1 year aniversary

 
  • I couldn't write my entry this morning, so I stop writing about yesterday's incident.

  • I couldn't write my entry this morning, so I'll stop writing about what happened yesterday.

 
  • June 23rd(Sat) is my 1 year anniversary since I came to Vanuatu.

  • June 23rd(Sat) will be my 1 year anniversary since I came to Vanuatu.

 
  • Concretely, I'd like to spend about six hours of that day reading a book at my cafe and went to the airport at 6 pm.

  • Specifically, I'd like to spend about six hours of that day reading a book at my cafe and then go to the airport at 6 pm.

 
  • Why would I like to go to the airport at that time?

  • Why do I want to go to the airport at that time?

 
  • Because it was 6:10 pm when I came to Vanuatu, and I would like to remind the memory of my arrival.

  • Because it was 6:10 pm when I came to Vanuatu, and I would like to be reminded of the memory of my arrival.

 
  • At the moment It was dark and rainy evening.

  • At that time it was a dark and rainy evening.

 
  • I hope it wouldn't rain.

  • I hope it won't rain.

 
  • Nevertheless, I'd like to appreciate everyone who is concerned with me on that wonderful anniversary.

  • Nevertheless, I'd like to appreciate everyone who is concerned about me on that wonderful anniversary.

 
  • Tomorrow, I'm going to tell some waitress of my cafe about the anniversary.

  • Tomorrow, I'm going to tell some of the waitresses at my cafe about the anniversary.

 
Sounds like a great way to celebrate such a milestone.
Jun 18th 2012 17:24 masa4
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  • Specifically, I'd like to spend about six hours of that day reading a book at my cafe and then go to the airport at 6 pm.

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Is "specifically" used more common than "concretely" by native speakers?
Jun 18th 2012 17:27 masa4
“

  • Tomorrow, I'm going to tell some of the waitresses at my cafe about the anniversary.

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"some of the waitresses at my cafe"... I'd like to memorize it.
Jun 18th 2012 17:31 masa4
Thank you for corrections.

Yes, I'm looking forward to spending this memorial day 5 days later.
Jun 19th 2012 04:51 パットリ
I don't really ever use "concretely"
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