Final diary of this year
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It has been two months since I had begun to use Lang-8. Reviewing all diaries, I don't know whether my writing has advanced or not. However I realize that I used to try to use new expressions that I was taught by all correctors. There are actually a lot of unknown English knowledge that are necessary to master it, however it's doubtless fact that I could learn a lot through all correctors and all friends in Lang-8.
Lang-8 became my favorite site. The time of using it occupies much time everyday, so it's trouble for me that I can't use it because of the fault of the internet. I will continue to write everyday next year. I hope that I can realize my advance when I read this writing just one year later. The followings are my targets of next year.
1. to try to write more quickly.
2. to try to use expressions that I learned from all correctors.
3. After writing, I will read my writing aloud three times.
4. After reading corrections, I will repeat to read them aloud at least ten times.
5. Could you please tell me good idea if you have ?
I'd like to appreciate all people who corrected and encouraged me. Through your support, I could spend really valuable time. Thank you very much. I wish that you all will continue to introduce me and will spend happy life next year. Please keep contact with me and help each other.
Thanks.
Lang-8 became my favorite site. The time of using it occupies much time everyday, so it's trouble for me that I can't use it because of the fault of the internet. I will continue to write everyday next year. I hope that I can realize my advance when I read this writing just one year later. The followings are my targets of next year.
1. to try to write more quickly.
2. to try to use expressions that I learned from all correctors.
3. After writing, I will read my writing aloud three times.
4. After reading corrections, I will repeat to read them aloud at least ten times.
5. Could you please tell me good idea if you have ?
I'd like to appreciate all people who corrected and encouraged me. Through your support, I could spend really valuable time. Thank you very much. I wish that you all will continue to introduce me and will spend happy life next year. Please keep contact with me and help each other.
Thanks.
It has been two months since I started using Lang-8.
Reviewing all my diaries, I don't know whether my writing has advanced or not.
However I realize that I used to try to use the new expressions I learned from corrections.
In all actuality, there is a lot about English that I still need to master, however there's no doubt that I can learn a lot through all the corrections and friends on Lang-8.
Lang-8 has become my favorite site.
I spend a lot of time using it everyday, so it's bothersome when I can't use it because of the fault of the internet.
I hope that I can realize my progress when I read this writing again in one year later.
The following things are my targets for next year.
to try to use expressions that I learned from corrections.
Could you please tell me any good ideas you might have .
I'd like to thank all people who have corrected my entries and encouraged me.
Through your support, I am able to make the most of my time.
I wish that you all will continue to extend your kindess to me and will have a happy new year.
Please keep in contact with me so we can help each other.
So it's easier to say "expression I learned from corrections."
2. make the most of/make good use of - 多分「むだにしない」だろう Can I say "あなたの援助のおかげで、時間をむだにしない”？
About No.2, I want to say 「皆さんの助け（援助）のおかげで、有意義な（ためになる、貴重な）時間を過ごした」
「あなたの応援のおかげで、時間を無駄にしない」→ We can understand what you want to say, however I don't think that it's natural.
Saying "I am able to make the most of my time" - gives the impression that because of our help, you don't have to waste time trying to figure out stuff, look things up etc etc because we have been able to help you.
It has been two months since I began to use Lang-8.
Reviewing all my diary entries diaries, I don't know whether my writing has advanced or not.
There are actually a lot of knowledge I don't have that is necessary to master English unknown English knowledge that are necessary to master it, however it's a doubtless fact that I could learn a lot through all correctors and all friends in Lang-8.
The time I spend of using it / The time it takes to use it occupies much time everyday, so it's trouble for me that I can't use it because of the fault of the internet. Not quite sure what you mean in the last part. Perhaps "I have a problem where I blame the internet when I use it too often"
I hope that I can realize my advancement when I read this writing just one year later.
The followings are my targets for next year.
Could you please tell me good ideas if you have them?
I'd like to appreciate thank / (show appreciation to) all people who corrected and encouraged me.
I wish that you all will continue to introduce me and will be happy spend happy life next year.
Please keep in contact with me and help each other.
I'll be glad if you read my another journals someday.