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Oct 21st 2011 04:34
I really feel quite enjoyable to use Lang-8. 2 weekes have passed since I began to keep diary with Lang-8. Recently I'm getting my diary corrected by some great users almost everyday. And I sometimes correct their diary written in Japanese and send messages each other. This sending messages is also attractive and encouraging. I'm looking forward to checking my mail box.
And I got 2 friends which are Japanese users. The messages which I write can't help but be long. I also want to write English as long and thoughtful as possible. I'll continue to write English, aming for being praized by English sppeakers.
jzzop
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 21st 2011 06:49
  • I really feel quite enjoyable to use Lang-8.

  • I am really enjoying using Lang-8.

 
  • 2 weekes have passed since I began to keep diary with Lang-8.

  • Two weeks have passed since I began keeping a diary with Lang-8.

 
  • And I sometimes correct their diary written in Japanese and send messages each other.

  • And I sometimes correct their diary written in Japanese. We also send messages to each other.

 
  • This sending messages is also attractive and encouraging.

  • This sending messages is also pleasant and encouraging. (Use of "attractive" is probably more appropriate for people or animals.)

 
  • And I got 2 friends which are Japanese users.

  • And I have 2 friends which are Japanese users.

 
  • The messages which I write can't help but be long.

  • I can't help writing long messages.

 
  • I also want to write English as long and thoughtful as possible.

  • I also want to write long English sentences as thoughtful as possible.

 
  • I'll continue to write English, aming for being praized by English sppeakers.

  • I'll continue to write English, striving for praise from English speakers. (just some minor suggestions)

 
Oct 21st 2011 18:32 masa4
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  • I'll continue to write English, striving for praise from English speakers. (just some minor suggestions)

”
What does "just some minor suggestions" mean?
Oct 21st 2011 18:39 masa4
Thank you for your comments. I want to try to write more pleasant sentences. To do so, I think I have to be more attractive person. Because if I become more attractive, I can meet attractive person like you(笑).
Oct 21st 2011 19:02 jzzop
"minor suggestions" whether or not you make the changes
is up to you. Maybe you mean "pleasant" instead of "attractive"? "Pleasant" is an attitude.

Do you think that becoming more "attractive" means attention to hairstyle, perfect teeth & skin, dressing with style, etc?
Oct 21st 2011 19:24 masa4
I want to try to tell again...I want to be more attractive as well as pleasant. Because to be pleasant person will make me meet another pleasant person like you. How about this?
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