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Mr.

Mr. Mitsuhashi, an office worker in Tokyo, went to a business to Osaka. He had time at Osaka station, he decided to polish his shoes. Out...
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Apr 26, 2013 13:18
haruchang

Now Yoshi became an adult and got married six month ago.

Now Yoshi became an adult and got married six month ago. She lived far from her parents, so she couldn't go there very often. Her par...
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Apr 26, 2013 13:18
haruchang

I'm so sad. I express my feeling. And I corrected my English sentences below.

The fact is I have totally lost myself. I'm all tired out. Having been through the full of ups and downs of love, I had and still hav...
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Apr 23, 2013 08:50
haruchang

The fact is I have totally lost myself. I'm all tired out.

Having been through full of ups and downs of love, I have a severe mental health problem. I pretend to be bright and cheery in front of p...
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Apr 21, 2013 11:25
haruchang

Her father never eats the dish he doesn't like.

If he ate three pieces of bread, it's true he likes it. Giving others joy and happiness, in return she praised, after this experience...
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Apr 18, 2013 21:21
haruchang

Her mother said with a smile.

" He praised you. Yoshi, What do you think he did? He put strawberry jam on bread, ate and praised it. Then he had another two piece...
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Apr 18, 2013 21:18
haruchang

Yoshi wanted to stay awake longer, but gradually she was getting sleepy.

Her mother said, " Yoshi had better go to sleep. I'll ask him to taste strawberry jam and if he likes it." Yoshi want to be...
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Apr 18, 2013 21:14
haruchang

I think it's difficult to use "not only A but also B" :)

Because she was not only praised but also she gave him joy and happiness. It this OK?
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Apr 17, 2013 08:07
haruchang

Is it OK? Her father comes home after her sleeping and goes to the office before her waking.

I wanted to say below sentence by using participial construction. However I have no good idea. Her father comes home after she sleep...
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Apr 12, 2013 08:54
haruchang

Yoshi wanted her father to taste jam.

Her father works hard and comes home very late every night. Her father comes home after Yoshi's sleeping and goes to the office befor...
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Apr 11, 2013 21:36
haruchang

Yoshi was very pleased with it. Her mother and grandparent praised her.

They praised Yoshi from their heart. And they keenly felt Yoshi could do something a little child couldn't do and she grew up.
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Apr 11, 2013 21:29
haruchang

They were surprised. Because it was truly delicious.

Her grandfather said, " You are smart. You made such delicious jam." Her grandmother said, " It's a big thing in our l...
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Apr 11, 2013 21:27
haruchang

Then Yoshi wanted to go to her grandparents and ask them to taste the jam.

So she brought it. Her grandparents have never eaten bread and strawberry jam. When they first saw it, they said " That's creepy...
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Apr 4, 2013 14:04
haruchang

After making a jam, she tasted it and compared the strawberry jam she bought at the supermarket.

The jam she made herself was even more delicious. Yoshi was happy and wanted to ask her mother to taste it. She brought her mother some j...
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Apr 4, 2013 13:51
haruchang

Yoshi went to the supermarket, bought strawberries and went back home.

Then she washed strawberries and put them into the pot with water. She added sugar and stir with a rice paddle for about thirty minutes. ...
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Apr 4, 2013 12:49