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Sep 01st 2012 12:08
I have poor voice because I had a cold and a sore throat. Last Saturday we went to the beach. After we played, although my cloths were wet, I didn't change into dry clothing. So Probably I caught a cold.
Kelly
Sep 01st 2012 12:25
  • After we played, although my cloths were wet, I didn't change into dry clothing.

  • After we played, although my clothes were wet, after I had finished playing I didn't change into dry clothing right away.

 
  • So Probably I caught a cold.

  • AsSo a Presult I probably I caught a cold.

 
I hope you feel better soon!!! :D
Sep 02nd 2012 03:49 haruchang
Thanks! I'm getting better a little.
Vermilion
Sep 01st 2012 12:53
  • I have poor voice today...

  • I have a poor voice today...

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  • I have poor voice because I had a cold and a sore throat.

  • I have a poor voice because I have a cold and a sore throat.

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  • Last Saturday we went to the beach.

  • Last Saturday, I went to the beach with.....and we played there, but I got my clothes wet.

    with someone. Did you go with somebody? That's why you said "we," but I don't know who you went with. You should mention it first.

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  • After we played, although my cloths were wet, I didn't change into dry clothing.

  • However, I didn't change into dry clothing after that.

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I'm sorry to hear that. Get better soon! Take care!
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