Godt Nat

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Jun 29, 2012 15:04
I dag arbejdede jeg mange timer.

Jeg arbejde for et trin.

I nat havde vi en tryllekunstner.

Jeg betjene spotlys (spotlight) og hjælp omkring trinet.

Godt nat!
Nicklas MT
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 29, 2012 17:22
  • Godt Nat

  • Godnat

 
  • Jeg arbejde for et trin.

  • Jeg arbejde for med en del af en forestilling.

    I am assuming that you mean that you worked on a part of the performance and have corrected the sentence to mean that. If this is not the case tell me what you intended to write and I will correct the new sentence.

 
  • Jeg betjene spotlys (spotlight) og hjælp omkring trinet.

  • Jeg betjente spotlys spotlightet og hjalp til med en del af forestillingen.

    If you are talking about a particular part of the show, like a particular trick you could just end the sentence in "... og hjalp til med et trick."
    We usually just say spotlight in Danish as well, but conjugate it as a Danish word. You could also say "rampelys" but that is used more figuratively.

 
  • Godt nat!

  • Godnat!

 

If you have any questions about the corrections feel free to ask. The whole "trin" thing threw me a bit off, and I might not have interpreted them correctly.

Jul 1, 2012 04:24 Kyle
My first sentence was "I work for a stage" meaning that I work for a venue that hosts performances, and that I run spotlight.

Jul 1, 2012 06:09 Nicklas MT
Ah, I see, I guess I would go with something along the lines of "Jeg arbejdede for et teater" or "Jeg arbejdede på et show" depending on how formal and professional it is supposed to be, the former being a bigger and more formally arranged thing than the latter. "Trin" means a stage in the sense of something being in its initial or final stage, which is why I was so confused (I thought you meant that you worked on a step of some process or show).
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