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I tried to write about China's modern history

I tried to write about China's modern history Topic : Imagine yourself as a Chinese living in the Mainland in the 1940s… Do you f...
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Feb 21, 2013 06:21
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Would I ask you to help me which part should i add something to make it to be...

Would I ask you to help me which part should i add something to make it to be more descriptive. This article is for my descriptive ess...
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Feb 18, 2013 21:50
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I revised my before descriptive essay to add more detail.

I revised my before descriptive essay to add more detail. I would like to ask native people to read and give me some comments please. a...
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Feb 16, 2013 20:10
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This is my first draft of descriptive essay about emergency room

I'm taking an English Writing Composition class in this semester. I have to submit my descriptive essay. but, This is the first time...
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Feb 9, 2013 14:15