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Topic 2 : Children should play sports for fun; they should not play sports in competition or contest.

It is evident that in our current society, Sports had tremendous importance in our lives. Some people think that Competition in sports is...
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Mar 31, 2012 15:52
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Please make remarks my mistakes. ^^ Topic : Art and music class should be required in young children's school like science and math class.

I am a student who is studying TOEFL. So, I hope to get productive criticisms. ^^ Particularly, logic, example. It is evidence in ou...
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Mar 31, 2012 15:16