Apr 16th 2013 17:03 KPC made 3 corrections for What is 'Hedging'?
Definition Of Hedging: Making an investment to reduce the risk of adverse price movements in an asset. Normally, a hedge consists of t...

Apr 12th 2013 15:36 Imidast commented on Analysis Essay. I really wo...
I think you need to write less to get people to correct this. It takes a lot of time to correct and it could take at least half an hour t...

Feb 17th 2013 16:05 Christina-Goelia made 28 corrections for I revised my before descrip...

Jan 26th 2013 04:32 k_mart2286 made 17 corrections for Reflective Essay ^^
This was well written. Best of luck to Bryan!

Jan 21st 2013 15:43 Jesse made 16 corrections for Statement of Purpose (with...
Exceptionally well written.

Sep 28th 2012 08:38 Meri J. made 4 corrections for The exhibition of Batman Da...
Hi Hoon, How are you? Long time no see! Actually, I read this interesting journal weeks ago! But I think the website had a problem,...

Aug 19th 2012 07:08 Meri J. made 14 corrections for The Story of Mojito
Hi, Hoon! :) Nice to see you! Really interesting writing, and very well done. ^^ ㅋㅋ 술집에서 연구를 많이 해야 했나요? ;)

Aug 09th 2012 10:04 Meri J. made 9 corrections for Pygmalion and Galatea
Great writing, Hoon! :) I like the story of Pygmalion, and I like the message that you found in the story. This is a great idea for the O...

Jul 06th 2012 18:29 Meginkitty made 5 corrections for I started learning Chinese.
Oh, you were accepted to university in Hong Kong?! Congratulations, Hoon! 축하해요! :) Just remember that "I" always needs a cap...

Jun 05th 2012 13:01 Shaye-Baye made 20 corrections for Printed books have had more...
Overall, very good! Your think clearly about your ideas and develop good ones. With a few adjustments and a bit more understanding of Eng...

Jun 05th 2012 12:46 Shaye-Baye made 16 corrections for why i want to study the dep...
Overall, I think this is a very good piece! By now you've already had your interview, but you can still learn from this. Your writing...

May 05th 2012 15:56 Meri J. made 6 corrections for I have some grammar questio...
Good question! :) The original sentences were incorrect, because "there is/are"/"there was/were" should match with...

May 04th 2012 12:55 superEGO made 6 corrections for I have some grammar questio...
"There is" is happening now. "There was" happened in the past. There is a book on the table NOW. There was a boo...

May 04th 2012 09:01 Meri J. made 1 corrections for Topic : People will spend l...
Hi, Hoon~ To connect your main idea with your reason and examples, you should say more about the subject: time spent cooking and prepa...

May 03rd 2012 21:21 Meri J. made 21 corrections for Topic : Movies and televisi...
Hi Hoon^^ Your essay structure is pretty good, and I like your two points. :) However, I think you need to be more specific about y...

Apr 30th 2012 15:04 Felathenin made 9 corrections for Topic : People will spend l...
Logically, this argument makes no sense. If people have more resources, and they choose to invest some resources in cooking and baking co...

Apr 28th 2012 18:13 Meginkitty made 15 corrections for Topic : Teachers should not...
What an interesting topic! I enjoyed reading, you have some really nice ideas here. I tried to make my corrections clear, but please ask ...

Apr 26th 2012 19:45 Christina-Goelia made 8 corrections for Topic : It is easier to bec...
we can discuss more on Skype^^

Apr 09th 2012 03:02 Daphneデフニ commented on I'm going to have an in...
Good luck!^^ wow Hong kong!

Apr 08th 2012 02:04 Meginkitty made 5 corrections for I'm going to have an in...
Hey! Advice... I think just to practice your English whenever you have the opportunity before your interview. Think especially about the ...

Apr 02nd 2012 08:10 Meri J. made 8 corrections for It is better to have a low ...
Very well written, Hoon! ^^ As always, Meginkitty's comment are excellent. :)

Apr 02nd 2012 08:00 Meri J. made 6 corrections for You should make sure that o...
Hi, Hoon :) Your writing is actually really good, but I think it doesn't match the essay subject. If you can check and tell me,...

Apr 02nd 2012 03:30 Meginkitty made 12 corrections for It is better to have a low ...
Interesting post! It is very interesting, how many things can affect our lives.

Apr 01st 2012 21:26 Meri J. made 22 corrections for Topic 2 : Children should p...
Really great work, Hoon! :) I made lots of suggestions again, but already your essay points are clear and well-written. :)

Apr 01st 2012 20:53 Meri J. made 21 corrections for Please make remarks my mist...
Really good writing, Hoon!! ^___^ You've done very well with structure, clear points, examples, vocabulary and grammar. :) Great wo...

Jan 16th 2012 20:15 Meginkitty made 3 corrections for Can i ask you a bit of ques...
Hi! I tried to clear up a few things here. Please ask me if you have any more questions! :)

Jan 16th 2012 16:17 helheim made 3 corrections for Can i ask you a bit of ques...
I hope this helps. I wish I could explain grammar rules better. D:

Nov 21st 2011 13:11 metal.carratt made 2 corrections for deserve to be blamed vs des...
'blame' is active voice, 'be blamed' if passive voice. What that means is the subject and object of the sentence change....

Nov 20th 2011 09:23 Shaye-Baye made 4 corrections for deserve to be blamed vs des...
"Blame" is used when you're blaming someone for something they did. That person is then "being blamed". Basically...

Nov 11th 2011 13:15 metal.carratt commented on I always have a problem to ...
With brainstorming, write down any ideas that come to your head, no matter how stupid or ridiculous. Sometimes the wacky ideas can work ...

Nov 09th 2011 06:49 Meri J. commented on I always have a problem to ...
Hi, Hoon:) Rico and Meginkitty have given you great suggestions! I agree.^^ As for me, I try 2 ways for brainstorming this kind of ...

Nov 08th 2011 23:49 Meginkitty made 3 corrections for I always have a problem to ...
Hmm, I have an idea! When you get given the question, think about your own experiences of what the question topic is. So, in this exam...

Nov 08th 2011 23:24 Rico commented on I always have a problem to ...
A few good reasons: 1) Conversation - this is the most important reason. Eating together regularly helps strengthen the family bond, a...

Nov 08th 2011 00:09 Meginkitty made 2 corrections for Today's my essay. (In o...
Meri J's corrections are great, just a couple of alternative phrases from me! Great essay, keep up the hard work!

Nov 06th 2011 18:08 Meri J. made 22 corrections for Today's my essay. (In o...
Good ideas, Hoon! ^^ I agree with your reasons too. Also, you've used lots of great vocabulary in this essay. :) I suggest addi...

Nov 06th 2011 09:28 Meri J. made 6 corrections for F4 - 친구의 고백, (Super Start K3)
Great job, Hoon! :) Thank you for the video. ^^ I hope those guys will succeed in their dream.

Oct 27th 2011 08:38 Meri J. made 2 corrections for Memorizing words is so diff...
아휴~ 어휘를 암기,,, 네, 어렵네요... 근데 할 수 있어요! :) Hoon, your English level 항상 향상! ^^ Although it's difficult to memorize every word ~ don'...

Oct 26th 2011 04:30 Meginkitty made 4 corrections for Memorizing words is so diff...
Good luck for the TOEFL! Do you know when you'll have the test? :)

Oct 20th 2011 20:27 Meri J. made 14 corrections for Today's my summary essa...
Good article writing, Hoon. :) I really wonder about that ancient city, now.^^

Oct 18th 2011 18:38 Meri J. made 1 corrections for Do you know Great Birth 2, ...
정말 고맙습니다~^^ 너무 재미있어요!

Oct 18th 2011 16:05 Meri J. made 1 corrections for I have a question. in Briti...
Hi, Hoon~ :) Interesting question! In these sentences, "on British society" and "in British society" have the same...

Oct 18th 2011 14:39 metal.carratt made 1 corrections for I have a question. in Briti...
Does it contradict? It is possible for one thing to have both positive and negative effects. Maybe different people were effected in di...

Oct 18th 2011 12:51 pinkrose commented on Today's my essay. (If y...
Hi Hoon^^ This is very difficult but you did it＼(*⌒0⌒)♪ I cannot write such a long essay.... When we talk with people, we must have a ...

Oct 17th 2011 21:14 Meri J. made 31 corrections for Today's my essay. (If y...
Hi Hoon~^^ Wow, long essay ~ good job! You've made a great effort, and your structure is clear. However, I couldn't unders...

Oct 10th 2011 21:10 Meri J. made 20 corrections for Today's my essay. (Enjo...
Good job, Hoon! This was a complex essay to write in English, but all your ideas are very clear, and well-ordered. :) You deserve to t...