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Aug 07th 2011 01:47
Today, I went to see fireworks, in Japanese, hanabi, with my friends. I don't know well, but I often hear the fireworks of Japanese are more beautiful and wonderful than any other countries. The recent fireworks are so eraborate, and we are very impressed by it. If I have anther chance, I'd like to go there again.

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Aug 07th 2011 07:09
  • Today, I went to see fireworks, in Japanese, hanabi, with my friends.

  • Today, I went to see fireworks (also known as hanabi in Japanese) with my friends.

 
  • I don't know well, but I often hear the fireworks of Japanese are more beautiful and wonderful than any other countries.

  • I don't know well if this is true, but I often hear that the fireworks of Japanese are more beautiful and wonderful than those of any other country.

 
  • The recent fireworks are so eraborate, and we are very impressed by it.

  • The recent Today's fireworks are so elaborate, and we are very impressed by it them.

 
  • If I have anther chance, I'd like to go there again.

  • If I have another chance, I'd like to go there again.

 
"Today" means "this current day," but "today's" can also mean contemporary, up-to-date, etc.

As for the fireworks, it sounds like you had a lot of fun!
Aug 07th 2011 11:56 しょっぴ
Thank you for the correcrions.
As you say, I had a lot of fun!
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