a mail to look for new place

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Jul 7, 2009 13:45
I want to move to Toronto, so now I'm looking for my new home on Claigslist, and I want to send following text. Please check my text.↓

「Hi we are Japanese student couple (Our visa expire in Feb 2009), and saw your ad on craigslist.
We are really interested in your place.

But we are in Vancouver now, so we can’t go to see there. But we got mood of your place. We’d like to live your place because of that environment (complete privacy, location, and so on) matches our assumption.

We can move into there July 27th if all goes smoothly.
If you haven’t decided next residents and you are OK to us, could you please tell us steps we have to do before move in and preliminary notes?