Hot tea
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Yesterday was hot day.
So I planed to drink ice tea in a cafe shop.
But in the cafe shop,it was cold because of air-conditioned too much!
It was far from being eco-friendly!!
So I decided to drink a cup of hot tea.
When I drank it,I thouht about one thing.
Recently,many people oppose to the nuclear power.
Japan is the democratic country.
So it is very valuable that we can say our opinions to the goverment.
But if we only criticise,it is not a solution to a problem.
We have to have own ideas and carry out its by ourselves.
I decided to restrict electricity more.
I will carry out it everyday!
Because I do not want to be a person who do only critic.
( ´・ω) (´・ω・) (・ω・`) (ω・` ) ( ´・ω) (´・ω・) (・ω・`) (ω・` )
So I planed to drink ice tea in a cafe shop.
But in the cafe shop,it was cold because of air-conditioned too much!
It was far from being eco-friendly!!
So I decided to drink a cup of hot tea.
When I drank it,I thouht about one thing.
Recently,many people oppose to the nuclear power.
Japan is the democratic country.
So it is very valuable that we can say our opinions to the goverment.
But if we only criticise,it is not a solution to a problem.
We have to have own ideas and carry out its by ourselves.
I decided to restrict electricity more.
I will carry out it everyday!
Because I do not want to be a person who do only critic.
( ´・ω) (´・ω・) (・ω・`) (ω・` ) ( ´・ω) (´・ω・) (・ω・`) (ω・` )


So I planned to drink ice tea in at a cafe shop.
Sounds more fluid this way
But in the cafe shop, it was cold because of air-conditioned too much! the air conditioner was blowing so much cold air!
When I drank it,I thought about one thing.
That recently many people oppose to the nuclear power.
The way you ended your sentence before this one you need the "that" in it
But if we only criticize, it is not a solution to the problem.
We have to have our own ideas and that are carried out its by ourselves.
I decided to restrict the amount of electricity more. I use.
I got what your saying but it didn't really make much sense. Grammatically yes but it just it not clear enough so I reworded to get your point across.
I will carry out it continue to restrict the amount of electricity I use everyday!
You cannot carry "it" (electricity) with you. xD So we have to do a little rewording in this case.
Because I do not want to be a person who do only critic. who is only a critic!
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Have a nice day☆☆☆
Yesterday was a hot day,
so I planned to drink iced tea in a cafe shop.
But in the cafe shop, it was cold chilly because of from too much air-conditioning! too much!
It was far from being So much for being eco-friendly!
So Therefore, I decided to drink a cup of hot tea instead.
When While I drank it, I started thouht thinking about something one thing.
Recently, many people have become opposed to the nuclear power.
And, Japan is the a democratic country.
So, we think it is very valuable that we can say to voice our opinions to the government.
But if we only criticize, it is not a we don't give any solution to a the problems.
We have to have develop and apply our own ideas and carry out its by ourselves.
For example, I decided to restrict my electricity more usage.
That's a solution I will carry out it fulfill every day!
Because I do not want to be am not a person who do only criticizes.
I understand.( ・∀・)
I will review the correction again and again☆
Have a nice weekend☆
But if we only criticize, it is not a we don't provide any solutions to a the problems.
Sorry about that. Here is the revised correction.