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Apr 11, 2014 16:53 小凱蒂 commented on Job Offer
Good luck with the job interview! :)
Apr 11, 2014 16:53 小凱蒂 made 12 corrections for Job Offer
Feb 3, 2014 01:40 Meister_Floh made 5 corrections for Go Seahawks
Hi, This should be a very good game. I'll be rooting for the Broncos, just because I like Peyton Manning.
Feb 3, 2014 01:38 ⋆。˚ e v a ⋆。˚✩ made 3 corrections for Go Seahawks
Feb 2, 2014 02:09 Nicorish made 12 corrections for Torii Hunter
Many of your sentences can be combined to make more of a complete thought.
Feb 2, 2014 02:05 Nina made 13 corrections for Torii Hunter
Jan 30, 2014 11:43 db23lax made 3 corrections for Feel Dizzy
Jan 27, 2014 16:53 Vermilion made 7 corrections for Ichiro Jersey
You like Ichiro!!
Jan 27, 2014 16:47 NyanTesla made 7 corrections for Ichiro Jersey
I have never seen a pancake restaurant in a mall!
Nov 16, 2013 01:02 faith33 made 3 corrections for 42
Nov 16, 2013 00:57 faith33 made 2 corrections for Cold
Oct 12, 2013 11:38 クロウ made 4 corrections for Cold
人生はつらいですね。がんばって
Oct 11, 2013 10:49 CFM-MA made 5 corrections for Swing and miss
If you are writing this sincerely, please don't be embarrassed! The phrases are actually quite close! Even among native speakers, w...
Oct 11, 2013 10:34 Gigantor made 3 corrections for Swing and miss
Oct 11, 2013 10:12 Jlbarrios made 9 corrections for Swing and miss
Don't be embarrassed, you're doing great! Just keep practicing the grammar rules (like subject-verb agreement)!
Oct 10, 2013 03:27 Matt made 2 corrections for 42
Oct 10, 2013 02:38 kanganzhu commented on 42
I am currently watching "42". It is a movie about Jackie Robinson based on actual events. Today I could finally understand the...
Oct 10, 2013 02:33 jalanb made 6 corrections for 42
Oct 9, 2013 01:40 JosephGekko made 6 corrections for Outdated attitudes
Oct 9, 2013 01:39 Agagooga made 6 corrections for Outdated attitudes
Oct 23, 2012 10:23 Languagegirl ランゲージガール made 16 corrections for House
Not too bad. Keep studying ^^
Oct 16, 2012 23:42 douten made 7 corrections for TOEIC Result
I would suggest finding a book (novel)/short stories that you like and read it. They're a great source to improve grammar, vocabs, et...
Oct 16, 2012 03:52 spacetopher made 6 corrections for Tigers 2-0 ALCS lead
You write very well. Keep up the good work!
Oct 11, 2012 19:07 74brad made 16 corrections for ebay
Hi Tomohide, I hope my corrections are ok. If they are not quite what you were trying to say, please let me know and I will try to make t...
Oct 10, 2012 16:37 Vermilion made 13 corrections for Two Heads Are Better Than One
Oh, you have a nice girlfriend.
Oct 5, 2012 15:24 sandyclef made 18 corrections for Question
You have good ideas. (^^)
Oct 5, 2012 13:51 Vermilion made 13 corrections for Question
Have a nice day!
Oct 3, 2012 21:56 HeyMcCall made 2 corrections for The A's won
楽しみにしていますよ! This game will be interesting to watch...
Oct 3, 2012 16:43 Tomohide24 commented on The A's won
マネーボールはオークランド・アスレチックスのゼネラルマネージャーであるビリー・ビーンを題材にした映画です。今年はまるで映画のような、試合を毎日見ることができて楽しいです。 こうして添削していただくとミスがたくさんあることに気づきます。本当に勉強になります。ありがとうご...
Oct 2, 2012 16:40 开喜 made 8 corrections for A's claim playoff spot ...
Make sure that you are paying attention to your particles such as "the, a, an, etc." Have you seen the movie Moneyball? It'...
Sep 30, 2012 17:55 Rocksteady made 14 corrections for Typhoon
I hope you can get home ok. I think I saw that some of the Shinkansens were stopped. I think power plugs and Wi-Fi networks are very impo...
Sep 30, 2012 17:51 RobsonM made 13 corrections for Typhoon
Great! And it sounds really interesting!
Sep 29, 2012 21:40 ghostgoat made 19 corrections for Stupid
Good job Tomohide! I understand how you feel, it's very difficult learning new ways to express yourself but it is rewarding and chall...
Sep 28, 2012 14:10 ghostgoat made 11 corrections for MLB Post Season
Great job Tomohide! I understand that baseball is quite popular in Japan?
Sep 27, 2012 07:39 0717kaori commented on Speaking Skill
こんにちは。 私はリスニングができるとスピーキングにもつながるのでは?と思っています。 読む・聞くでインプットを増やしていくと、少しずつアウトプットにつながると思いますよ。 リスニングについて日記を書いたので、もし参考になればと思います。 http://lang...
Sep 27, 2012 02:04 superfresh made 12 corrections for To Do
英語のTensesがいつも難しいですが、ともひでさんの日記にはTenseの問題は全然ありません。 素晴らしいですよ。 The corrections I made were mostly minor. Since there were no tense errors...
Sep 26, 2012 19:45 made 9 corrections for Speaking Skill
Don't be sad Hide-san. I had a student last year and he couldn't really speak English at all even the basics...but he didn't ...
Sep 26, 2012 18:55 Mary Ko made 10 corrections for Speaking Skill
Everything is going to be okay. Never give up learning English and watching movies. It'll pay off eventually. Just say whichever wo...
Sep 25, 2012 13:57 superfresh made 20 corrections for Foreigner Friends
I liked your journal! It was easy to understand. I also think it's fun to meet people from all over the world. The internet is cer...
Sep 24, 2012 11:13 Vermilion made 11 corrections for To Do
がんばってください。
Sep 22, 2012 01:09 tauhotdog made 7 corrections for English Examination
頑張れ!You can do it!!!!
Sep 21, 2012 13:31 Vermilion made 8 corrections for English Examination
Somehow, she likes to teach you. That's good!
Sep 19, 2012 21:35 thea_f made 6 corrections for Today's Plan
I think all Tiger fans will enjoy the game. Good luck!
Sep 19, 2012 19:04 ghostgoat made 13 corrections for Today's Plan
Good job Tomohide! Have fun trying to understand them when they/you are drunk!
Sep 18, 2012 00:02 tauhotdog made 2 corrections for Best Friend
Sounds like a very good friend. Luckily, Tokyo and Osaka are only 2 hours away via the Shinkansen. But everyone must be busy with work, s...
Sep 17, 2012 16:23 Vermilion made 12 corrections for Best Friend
後ろに見えているのは、ドンキホーテのところですか?
Sep 16, 2012 12:40 Vermilion made 10 corrections for Okonimiyaki
Oh, I hope you'll get better score than before. If you don't, you should study more to get better score another time. visit を...
Sep 16, 2012 12:27 にんき made 14 corrections for Okonimiyaki
私もお好み焼きが大好き~(^^) 日記をよく書きました!
Sep 14, 2012 18:01 ghostgoat made 10 corrections for American and Australian
Your English is impressive! Great job.
Sep 12, 2012 15:32 tauhotdog made 5 corrections for Beer Restaurant
$27 for dessert? That sounds like Ginza prices.