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マネーボールはオークランド・アスレチックスのゼネラルマネージャーであるビリー・ビーンを題材にした映画です。今年はまるで映画のような、試合を毎日見ることができて楽しいです。
こうして添削していただくとミスがたくさんあることに気づきます。本当に勉強になります。ありがとうご...
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英語のTensesがいつも難しいですが、ともひでさんの日記にはTenseの問題は全然ありません。 素晴らしいですよ。
The corrections I made were mostly minor. Since there were no tense errors...
Sep 26, 2012 19:45
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Don't be sad Hide-san. I had a student last year and he couldn't really speak English at all even the basics...but he didn't ...
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Everything is going to be okay. Never give up learning English and watching movies. It'll pay off eventually.
Just say whichever wo...
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I liked your journal! It was easy to understand.
I also think it's fun to meet people from all over the world. The internet is cer...
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Sounds like a very good friend. Luckily, Tokyo and Osaka are only 2 hours away via the Shinkansen. But everyone must be busy with work, s...
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Oh, I hope you'll get better score than before. If you don't, you should study more to get better score another time.
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Good luck with the job interview! :)
Hi, This should be a very good game. I'll be rooting for the Broncos, just because I like Peyton Manning.
Many of your sentences can be combined to make more of a complete thought.
You like Ichiro!!
I have never seen a pancake restaurant in a mall!
人生はつらいですね。がんばって
If you are writing this sincerely, please don't be embarrassed! The phrases are actually quite close! Even among native speakers, w...
Don't be embarrassed, you're doing great! Just keep practicing the grammar rules (like subject-verb agreement)!
I am currently watching "42". It is a movie about Jackie Robinson based on actual events. Today I could finally understand the...
Not too bad. Keep studying ^^
I would suggest finding a book (novel)/short stories that you like and read it. They're a great source to improve grammar, vocabs, et...
You write very well. Keep up the good work!
Hi Tomohide, I hope my corrections are ok. If they are not quite what you were trying to say, please let me know and I will try to make t...
Oh, you have a nice girlfriend.
You have good ideas. (^^)
Have a nice day!
楽しみにしていますよ! This game will be interesting to watch...
マネーボールはオークランド・アスレチックスのゼネラルマネージャーであるビリー・ビーンを題材にした映画です。今年はまるで映画のような、試合を毎日見ることができて楽しいです。 こうして添削していただくとミスがたくさんあることに気づきます。本当に勉強になります。ありがとうご...
Make sure that you are paying attention to your particles such as "the, a, an, etc." Have you seen the movie Moneyball? It'...
I hope you can get home ok. I think I saw that some of the Shinkansens were stopped. I think power plugs and Wi-Fi networks are very impo...
Great! And it sounds really interesting!
Good job Tomohide! I understand how you feel, it's very difficult learning new ways to express yourself but it is rewarding and chall...
Great job Tomohide! I understand that baseball is quite popular in Japan?
こんにちは。 私はリスニングができるとスピーキングにもつながるのでは?と思っています。 読む・聞くでインプットを増やしていくと、少しずつアウトプットにつながると思いますよ。 リスニングについて日記を書いたので、もし参考になればと思います。 http://lang...
英語のTensesがいつも難しいですが、ともひでさんの日記にはTenseの問題は全然ありません。 素晴らしいですよ。 The corrections I made were mostly minor. Since there were no tense errors...
Don't be sad Hide-san. I had a student last year and he couldn't really speak English at all even the basics...but he didn't ...
Everything is going to be okay. Never give up learning English and watching movies. It'll pay off eventually. Just say whichever wo...
I liked your journal! It was easy to understand. I also think it's fun to meet people from all over the world. The internet is cer...
がんばってください。
頑張れ!You can do it!!!!
Somehow, she likes to teach you. That's good!
I think all Tiger fans will enjoy the game. Good luck!
Good job Tomohide! Have fun trying to understand them when they/you are drunk!
Sounds like a very good friend. Luckily, Tokyo and Osaka are only 2 hours away via the Shinkansen. But everyone must be busy with work, s...
後ろに見えているのは、ドンキホーテのところですか?
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私もお好み焼きが大好き~(^^) 日記をよく書きました!
Your English is impressive! Great job.
$27 for dessert? That sounds like Ginza prices.