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The last business day of the year

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Dec 30th 2011 10:13
It's the last business day of the year.
The business struggled in the first year when we were open new cafe last Jun.
Recently It's improve only slightly.

I'm really thankful all our consumers.
We'd like to improve our coffee shop,product,service,coffee goods and all.

wish everyone good luck for the coming year.
Thank you.
JaneJein
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Dec 30th 2011 10:46
  • The business struggled in the first year when we were open new cafe last Jun.

  • The business struggled in the first year when we were open new cafe last June.

 
  • Recently It's improve only slightly.

  • Recently, it's improve only slightly.ೝ

 
  • I'm really thankful all our consumers.

  • I'm really thankful to all of our consumers.

 
  • wish everyone good luck for the coming year.

  • I would like to wish everyone good luck for the coming year.

 
Dec 31st 2011 13:10 Tomohide24
添削ありがとうございます。
May
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Dec 30th 2011 16:58
  • The business struggled in the first year when we were open new cafe last Jun.

  • The business struggled in the first year when we were opened a new cafe last June.

 
  • Recently It's improve only slightly.

  • Recently It's improving only slightly. (Recently, it has only slightly improved.)

 
  • I'm really thankful all our consumers.

  • I'm really thankful for all of our consumers.

 
  • We'd like to improve our coffee shop,product,service,coffee goods and all.

  • We'd like to improve our coffee shop, products, service, coffee goods, and all. (and everything else.)

 
  • wish everyone good luck for the coming year.

  • I wish everyone good luck in the coming year.

 
So you opened a cafe? That sounds great! I hope you get lots of business in the coming year.
Dec 31st 2011 00:21 Tomohide24
Happy New Year!!　カフェに興味をお持ちなんですね。もし何か協力できることがあれば遠慮なくおっしゃってください。英語できませんがコーヒービジネスは１６年のキャリアがあります。いつも添削していただいてありがとうございます。
Dec 31st 2011 13:04 May
そうですか。いいビジネスですね！もし私は日本に言ったらともひでさんのコーヒーを飲みたいです。
Dec 31st 2011 13:11 Tomohide24
その時はぜひ、大阪でしたら観光案内も致しますよ（笑）
Dec 31st 2011 13:17 May
大阪に行った事あります。大阪のお好み焼きは美味しいですね。二度と行きたいです。
Dec 31st 2011 18:15 Tomohide24
もっと早く知り合えばよかったですね。ぜひ次回は大阪のおいしいお店を案内します。お好み焼きとたこ焼きは美味しいですよ。うどんもおいしいです。
Jan 02nd 2012 14:37 May
急にお腹すきました（笑）ぜひ二度と行きたいです。
Zia(ジア)
Dec 30th 2011 22:38
Hopefully I can make it to your shop this new year. I couldn't find it last time!
Dec 31st 2011 00:23 Tomohide24
Happy New Year!! hahaha.... ぜひ次回は来てください。というかskypeで教えてくださいよ。次回は必ず案内します。それではよいお年を。
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