My co-worker has pain in her knee. She will be given surgery to replace her knee to artificial one shortly. Recently she looks depressed. I said “How about your knee.” She said “Thank you. Not so good.” “I had some experiences to perform that kind of operation as a surgeon. Don’t worry too much. It is not so risky one. Nowadays, it is one of the standard medical treatment.” “You did it?” “Yes. I did it as a main operator or an assistant operator. So I know it well.” “Aha. Of course, I have some friends who have given the surgery and I know it is not special one. But for me... It is not so calm...” “Hum... I agree with you. It is not same ‘for someone’ and ‘for me’.... But I believe that you will get comfortable knee soon.” I regret whether my advice is suitable or not in this case...
My co-worker has a pain in her knee. ("a pain" doesn't sound that serious, so you could instead write "a problem with her knee")
She will be given have surgery to replace her knee to an artificial one shortly.
Recently she has been looking depressed.
Not so good.” “I have some experiences to from performing that kind of operation as a surgeon.
It is not so a risky one.
Nowadays, it is one of the standard medical treatments.” “You did it?” “Yes.
Of course, I have some friends who have had the surgery and I know it is not special one.
It is not so that easy to stay calm...” “Hum...
It is not the same ‘for someone’ and as it is ‘for me’....
But I believe that you will get a working comfortable knee soon.” I regret whether my advice is suitable or not in this case...
Example:
I said “How about your knee.”
She said “Thank you. Not so good.”
“I had some experiences to perform that kind of operation as a surgeon. Don’t worry too much. It is not so risky one. Nowadays, it is one of the standard medical treatment.”
“You did it?”
“Yes. I did it as a main operator or an assistant operator. So I know it well.”
“Aha. Of course, I have some friends who have given the surgery and I know it is not special one. But for me... It is not so calm...”
“Hum... I agree with you. It is not same ‘for someone’ and ‘for me’.... But I believe that you will get comfortable knee soon.”
(didn't fix the errors in the example)
I think you are right. I'll use line break next time. Thank you.