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Hi!Thank you for coming my page!I am 22 years old.
I like to travel abroad.
I have been to USA,Italy,Vietnam,Cambodia,India,Tanzania,Koria,Australia,Laos,Thailand.

I want to study abroad in the future:)
I study IELTS to pass for examination.
I will update my sentense to raise my score.



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yoko

Please correct my sentense for IELTS writing:)

A lot of students try to take part in volunteer nowadays to contribute to our society. However it is argued that univercity students do...
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Aug 28, 2012 22:31
yoko

What films do you recommend?

I watched a film today.The title is 'Seize the Day' and this film was released in 1959. High school students who are residential ...
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Nov 7, 2011 00:42
yoko

Motive of application

It’s been a while. I will apply for NGO staff and I must write motive of application in English. I ask you to correct it. I have been ...
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May 26, 2011 00:27
yoko

I had a cold.><

I had a cold so I couldn't write a diary. But I am fine now since I went to hospital and I slept all day long in my home. I wil...
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Apr 9, 2011 00:23
yoko

What is your favorite song and movie?

My favorite singer is Avril Lavigne. She is so cute and her songs are fantastic! I also love Korean pop. I especially recommend girl&#...
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Apr 5, 2011 23:51
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