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Apr 28th 2011 01:11
Thank you always for your help. I'm really glad for you to correct my sentences. By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about Japanese big earthquake. This movie is popular in Japanese website "ニコニコ動画" just now. This movie is unofficial, but refer to the data on the meteorological Agency. This movie make the data to be visible. Besides, this data is limited more than magnitude of 4. Main earthquake starts around 2:20. It's really awful(^_^;)

ひさ子상미
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 28th 2011 04:27
  • By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about Japanese big earthquake.

  • By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about Japanese big earthquakes.

 
(>.<)
Apr 29th 2011 15:31 takaya
Hi, ひさ子. <`ヘ´>日本ヤバいlol
Shang
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 28th 2011 07:01
  • Thank you always for your help.

  • Thank you always for your help. As always, thank you for your help.

 
  • I'm really glad for you to correct my sentences.

  • I'm really glad for you to correct my sentences. I'm really glad that you correct my sentences.

 
  • By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about Japanese big earthquake.

  • By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about Japanese big earthquakes. Or "By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about big Japanese earthquakes"

 
  • This movie is popular in Japanese website "ニコニコ動画" just now.

  • This movie is popular in Japanese website "ニコニコ動画" just now. This movie is popular on the Japanese website "ニコニコ動画" right now.

 
  • This movie make the data to be visible.

  • This movie make the data to be visible. This movie makes the data easier to understand.

 
  • Besides, this data is limited more than magnitude of 4.

  • Besides, this data is limited more than magnitude of 4. This data is limited to a magnitude of about 4.

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  • Main earthquake starts around 2:20.

  • Main earthquake starts around 2:20.The main earthquake starts around 2:20.

 
I did my best to correct the sentence structure without changing your original meaning.
Apr 29th 2011 15:56 takaya
Hi, Shang. It's nice to see you again. Thank you for correcting my sentences. By the way, do you like "はじめの一歩"? Actually, I like it, too. Although it's very interesting, the author doesn't appear often. That's because there seem to have few material for his comics.
Apr 30th 2011 04:15 Shang
Yes, it's one of my favorites. I also enjoy "北斗の拳" and "ダーティペア". I hope to finish "はじめの一歩" soon. I'm a few hundred chapters behind.
cuavsfan
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 29th 2011 03:08
  • I'm really glad for you to correct my sentences.

  • I really appreciate you correcting my sentences.

 
  • By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about Japanese big earthquake.

  • By the way, I'd like to introduce a movie about (big) Japanese big earthquake.

 
  • This movie is popular in Japanese website "ニコニコ動画" just now.

  • This movie is popular on the Japanese website "ニコニコ動画" (right) now.

 
  • This movie is unofficial, but refer to the data on the meteorological Agency.

  • This movie is unofficial, but it refers to the data from the meteorological agency.

 
やっぱい、怖いですね。
Apr 29th 2011 16:02 takaya
cuavsfanさん、いつもありがとうございます。本当に地震は怖いですよ。実は日本で地震体験ができる場所があります。東京の池袋という場所にある『東京消防庁　池袋防災館』で地震体験ができます。この場所は、地震の経験がない外国の方に人気があるようです。もし日本に来る事があるようでしたら、ぜひ一度行ってみてください。

↓『東京消防庁　池袋防災館』のホームページです↓
http://www.tfd.metro.tokyo.jp/hp-ikbskan/index.html
May 05th 2011 22:45 cuavsfan
そんなところもありますか。この数週間、普通より人が多いかな。。。
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