The weather turns so hot

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Apr 16th 2011 02:34

The sun is fierce ! The weather here is getting hotter and hotter .

Therefore poeple here always buy as much as possible sunscreen.

As for me , whenever I go to my school I must put some sunscreen on my skin

for fear that i will get a tan !

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Thank you for your correction!

Apr 16th 2011 02:49

The weather turns so hot
The weather turns so hot The weather is turning so warm

The weather here is getting hotter and hotter .
The weather here is getting hotter and hotter (preferably: "warmer and warmer").

Therefore poeple here always buy as much as possible sunscreen.
Therefore people here always buy as much sunscreen as possible sunscreen. [or "... buy as much sunscreen as they can.]

Yes, the weather is getting warmer, and we get the sun almost everyday here! :)

- Just to note: In English there is usually no space before most punctuations (except for brackets). So, instead of "How are you ? I am fine !", we write "How are you? I am fine!"

Jia you!