The weather turns so hot
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The sun is fierce ! The weather here is getting hotter and hotter .
Therefore poeple here always buy as much as possible sunscreen.
As for me , whenever I go to my school I must put some sunscreen on my skin
for fear that i will get a tan !
Therefore poeple here always buy as much as possible sunscreen.
As for me , whenever I go to my school I must put some sunscreen on my skin
for fear that i will get a tan !

The weather turns so hot The weather is turning so warm
The weather here is getting hotter and hotter (preferably: "warmer and warmer").
Therefore people here always buy as much sunscreen as possible sunscreen. [or "... buy as much sunscreen as they can.]
- Just to note: In English there is usually no space before most punctuations (except for brackets). So, instead of "How are you ? I am fine !", we write "How are you? I am fine!"
Jia you!
Ok ok no space before most punctuations!:-)Thank you for teaching me! Nice teaching.