I drunk with my colleagues and their friends. We had drank for 10 hours. It was the longest record in my experience. We went to 5 bars and 1 Mcdonald. Finnish people drink early time. Actually we went to the first bar on three p.m. The first bar's name is "Fish bar", but they don't sell fish. It's mysterious. The second bar was Indian style bar. We had some spicy and sweet shots. After then, we went to Thai style one. The next was modern Finnish style, the next was Latin style one, the last was Mcdonald, in other words American style. What a international bar hopping! Most of the participants were Finnish people, but they can speak English very well. If they find non-Finnish-speakers in their group, they speak in English. This is very thankful for me, but unfortunately I couldn't understand even in English. I should learn conversational English. By the way, One of them imitated Borat below. However I didn't know him. Is he famous? Why is he funny?
We went to 5 bars and 1 McDonald. (This word is of Scottish origin and has a second capital letter. I'm not sure of the reasons but it's just like this.)
Finnish people drink early time.
Finnish people start drinking early time.
Actually we went to the first bar on three p.m. The first bar's name is "Fish bar", but they don't sell fish.
Actually we went to the first bar onat three p.m. The first bar's name isIt was called "Fish bar", but they don'tsell fish. (You should start a new paragraph with this sentence because the time change.)
The next was modern Finnish style, the next was Latin style one, the last was Mcdonald, in other words American style.
The next was a modern Finnish stylebar, the next wasthen a Latin style one, and the last was McDonald, in other words, American style. (I've corrected certain words to add variety to the sentence. You had too many 'style' here.)
What a international bar hopping!
What a international bar hopping! (Start a new paragraph with this sentence.)
Most of the participants were Finnish people, but they can speak English very well.
Most of the participants were Finnish people, but they can speak English very well. (You can leave out 'people' here because you mentioned ' participants' already, which indicates people.)
It seems that Finnish people really start drinking early!
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I drunk with my colleagues and their friends. We had drank for 10 hours. It was the longest record in my experience. We went to 5 bars and 1 Mcdonald. Finnish people drink early time. Actually we went to the first bar on three p.m. The first bar's name is "Fish bar", but they don't sell fish. It's my
I drank with my colleagues and their friends.
Finnish people drink early time.
Actually we went to the first bar at three p.m. The first bar's name was "Fish bar", but they don't (really) sell fish.
It's kind of strange.
After that, we went to Thai style one.
The next was a modern Finnish style, the next was Latin style one, and the last was Mcdonald, in other words American style.
Most of the people there were Finnish people, but they could speak English very well.
If they meet non-Finnish-speakers in their group, they speak in English.
This is very courteous/fortunate for me, but unfortunately I couldn't understand even in English.
I should (probably) learn conversational English.
By the way, one of them imitated Borat below.
However I didn't know who he was.
The second bar was an Indian style bar.
After that, we went to a Thai style one.
The next was a modern Finnish style, the next was a Latin style one, and the last was Mcdonald, in other words American style.
What an international bar hopping!
I only corrected what the first poster didn't manage to fix. Good job!
We went to 5 bars and 1 McDonald. (This word is of Scottish origin and has a second capital letter. I'm not sure of the reasons but it's just like this.)
Finnish people start drinking early time.
Actually we went to the first bar on at three p.m. The first bar's name is It was called "Fish bar", but they don't sell fish. (You should start a new paragraph with this sentence because the time change.)
The next was a modern Finnish style bar, the next was then a Latin style one, and the last was McDonald, in other words, American style. (I've corrected certain words to add variety to the sentence. You had too many 'style' here.)
What a international bar hopping! (Start a new paragraph with this sentence.)
Most of the participants were Finnish people, but they can speak English very well. (You can leave out 'people' here because you mentioned ' participants' already, which indicates people.)
(My corrections are red and comments are blue. Let me know if you have any questions.)