With Nothing To Do

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Apr 14, 2012 05:49
Note: Please tell me if anything sounds odd.

I'm lying in a hammock and watching a TV show with my computer on my lap. On this TV show, people discuss their family problems. I'm not very fond of it, but there aren't any other interesting TV programs on right now.

Thanks for reading!
ArUichigo
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 14, 2012 06:11
  • Without Nothing To Do

  • Without Nothing To Do

    'Without Nothing To Do' is actually a double negative

 
  • I'm lying on a hammock and watching a TV show with my computer on my legs.

  • I'm lying in a hammock and watching a TV show with my computer on my lap.

    Your upper legs can be referred to as your 'lap' when something is resting on them.

 
  • In this TV show, people discuss their familiar problems.

  • On this TV show, people discuss their family problems.

    I assume you meant family.. Otherwise maybe you meant 'personal' :3

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  • I'm not very fond of it, but there isn't any other interesting TV program right now.

  • I'm not very fond of it, but there aren't any other interesting TV programs on right now.

 

:)

Apr 14, 2012 06:22 Esphiritu
Thanks ArUichigo very much!

Apr 14, 2012 09:57 poripori


Just for killing a moment.

Apr 14, 2012 10:06 Esphiritu
I couldn't see the video. There was a internal error. Thanks!

Apr 14, 2012 10:09 Esphiritu
Hahahahaha, It was funny, thanks miporin for the video
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