Do You Believe In Love At First Sight?

I don't know if it's appropiate to say that one falls in love at first sight, but you definetly definitely feel an intense attraction for a person when you see him/her.

It's happened to me, today actually.

I went to a fitness club/gym to ask for their services and there was a girl whom I really liked her.

*most english speakers don't say whom, but it is correct

I found her to be very sexy. *I thought she was very sexy.

She was a clerk of at the gym.

And when she was talking, I felt and heard my heart beaten.

I was frightened at by her presence.

Well, that sort of spark it happened to me a couple of times(by the way can I say that I feel a spark for someone?).

*yes, you can say she makes you feel a spark

I recently was head over heels for a girl of from my university, or but it's better to say that I'm head over heels for this girl.

I think the person who says that he/she fell in love at first sight is a little bit insane.

But I think that most men have a spark by seeing the girl and then they fall in love by eating the food that the girls cooks.

As for girls I think they have feel a spark by listening to the guy and then they fall in love if the guy is good in the bed.

Thanks for reading!

I don't know if it's appropiate to say that one falls in love at first sight, but you definitely feel an intense attraction for a person when you see him/her.

It happened to me today, actually.

Sounds more natural to me

I went to a fitness club/gym to ask about their services and there was a girl whom I really liked.

The gym is the best place at my university to see attractive women ^.^

I found her to be very/really sexy.

It was all I could do to not kiss her.

I think your version is okay, but this sounds better to me.

I was awed by her presence.

I was awed --> Me quedé asombrado en su presencia [lo que quisiste decir, no?]
I was frightened --> Tuve miedo en su presencia

I almost couldn't speak, but I took the trouble and I said, stuttering: "Can I see the facilities?".

Well, that sort of spark of interest it happened to me a couple of times_(by the way can I say that I feel a spark for someone?).

I'd say "there was a spark of interest" or "there was a connection between us" or "we had chemistry"

But I think that most men have their interest sparked by seeing the girl and then they fall in love by eating the food that the girl cooks.

As for girls, I think they feel a spark by listening to the guy and then they fall in love if the guy is good in bed.

And while she was talking I could feel and hear my heart beating.

This sounds more natural to me.

It took all that I had not to kiss her.

This sentence felt a bit awkward, so I think this get the point across better.

I was in awe of her presence.

To be "awed" is to be overcome with fear of something, so that is not what you mean here. By changing "awe" to a noun as I did here, you get a meaning more like "I was amazed by her presence."

I have had sparks fly like that a couple of times.

"Sparks fly" is a common phrase for initial attraction, and I think it works very well here. Here are a couple more examples:
"I could see the sparks fly when I kissed her for the first time."
"When my hand brushed against his back, I could feel the sparks fly."

I recently was head over heels for a girl from my university, but it's better to say that I'm head over heels for this girl.

I'm confused by this sentence. I'm not sure if the second part is referring to the girl from the university or the girl from the gym.

Because love takes time, coming together and shared experiences and that sort of stuff.

"Love takes time" sounds far more natural to me

But I think that most men have their interest sparked by seeing a girl and then they fall in love by eating the food that the girl cooks.

As for girls I think they feel a spark by listening to a guy and then they fall in love if the guy is good in bed.