A Bad Day And a Long Night

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Aug 13, 2011 14:21
I decided to write here in Lang-8 because I'm not sleepy. Here in my town it hasn't stopped raining for 4 days. Uhg, it's unpleasant. Today for example, I woke up in the morning and I realized that the weather was terrible, without sun. I had to be at work at 8:00, so I was in a hurry. I got wet because I had to walk to the bus station, when I arrived there the bus was full! If had walked faster, I would have been on time. I had to wait for another bus. At last, I arrived to work 10 minutes late (worried and wet), so when I went to the building I met a co-worker (A very pretty girl whom I really like) who asked: "What are you doing here?". "As you can see I'm going to work" I said. "Didn't you call them to ask for your schedule?" she asked me. "I didn't, I forgot to" I answered. Then she told me that the schedule was changed yesterday. It turned out that I didn't work today. Ahgg! I was so angry. If I had called, I could have slept 30 more minutes and I could have stayed home instead of dealing with the weather.

I think I getting sick, I'm sneezing and coughing a lot and have a runny nose too. Ugh. After all that, I went to the coffee shop to drink some coffee with my co-worker.



ChaseOfHearts
Thank you for your correction!
Aug 13, 2011 14:38
  • A bad day and a long night

  • A bBad dDay and a lLong nNight

 
  • I decided to write here in Lang-8 because I can't get sleepy.

  • I decided to write here in Lang-8 because I can't get I'm not sleepy.

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  • I had to be at work at 8:00 o'clock, I was in a hurry.

  • I had to be at work at 8:00 o'clock, so I was in a hurry.

 
  • I got wet because I had to walk to the bus station, when I arrived there the bus was full!

  • I got wet because I had to walk to the bus station,. wWhen I arrived there the bus was full!

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  • I had to wait another bus.

  • I had to wait for another bus.

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  • At last, I arrived to work 10 minutes late (worried and wet), so when I was going to the building I met a co-worker (A girl very pretty that I really like her) who said: "What are you doing here?".

  • At last, I arrived to work 10 minutes late (worried and wet),. so wWhen I was going went to the building I met a co-worker (A girl very pretty that a very pretty girl whom I really like her) who said asked: "What are you doing here?".

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  • "As you can see I'm going to work" I said.

  • "As you can see, I'm going to work," I said.

 
  • "Didn't you call them to know your schedule?" she asked me.

  • "Didn't you call them to know ask for your schedule?" she asked me.

 
  • "I didn't, I forgot it" I answered.

  • "I didn't,. I forgot it to," I answered.

 
  • Then she told me that the schedule was changed the day before.

  • Then she told me that the schedule was changed the day before yesterday.

 
  • ahgg!

  • aAhgg!

 
  • If I had called, I would have slept 30 minutes more and I would have stayed in home instead of dealing with the weather.

  • If I had called, I would could have slept 30 more minutes more and I would could have stayed in home instead of dealing with the weather.

 
  • I think I getting sick, I'm sneezing and coughing a lot and have a running nose too.

  • I think I getting sick,. I'm sneezing and coughing a lot and I have a running runny nose too.

 
  • ugh.

  • uUgh.

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  • After all, I went to the coffe shop to drink some coffe with my co-worker.

  • After all that, I went to the coffee shop to drink some coffee with my co-worker.

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What an unfortunate day! At least you wrote a great story! (:

Aug 15, 2011 06:50 Esphiritu
Thank you ChaseOfHearts!
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