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Feb 04th 2011 20:50
This is my first writing here.
I'm not used to keeping a diary, so I'm wondering what to write...

Well...
I found the bicycle tire was getting flat a few days ago.
Then I put some air in the tire.
However today!
The tire was almost flat again.
I'm afraid it needs repair.

Telepiel
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 05th 2011 08:23
  • I found the bicycle tire was getting flat a few days ago.

  • I found the my bicycle tire was getting flat a few days ago.

 
  • However today!

  • Today, however,

 
  • The tire was almost flat again.

  • the tire was almost flat again. (combine this line with the previous one)

 
Good job!
Feb 09th 2011 10:58 kyoko -きょうこ-
Thank you so much and sorry for the delay in thanks.
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