Is this title correct?

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Nov 9, 2019 11:23
Newspaper of the XXX City Civil Servants Veterinary Association

This is the title of our newsletter.
I use it for an association of veterinarians who work for a local government of a big city.
I know it sounds unusual.
So can I ask you to arrange this title so that it sounds natural?
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