made 14 corrections for Notion
You wrote about a challenging topic, but you did well :)
Jun 13, 2012 04:02
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made 14 corrections for Exercise of using english
This piece seems like a pretty tough work to translate. The sentences don't seem to flow together to give context. I can't even...
commented on Bid guitar
I won the bidding for a guitar yesterday.
I started playing the guitar 10 years ago when I was still living in my hometown.
I was very ...
made 9 corrections for Worried about taking aggr...
I did this fast so I might have missed some stuff, but I think I covered all the major things.
Sorry about your job, hope everything wor...
made 14 corrections for Changing job
I hope that someday you can share your dreams with the future generation.
Just continue writing and I will review your Journals for co...
It was easy to understand. Keep at it!
変なことじゃん。
You wrote about a challenging topic, but you did well :)
你好 我的名字是密西西比州(辛西亚jonhson);我今天看到您的个人资料,我真的很喜欢在我的电子邮件ID(cynthiajohnsono1@yahoo.com)it.Plz联系我,我会给你我的自我介绍,也发送给您我pictures.and有很重要的问题,我想告诉yo...
This piece seems like a pretty tough work to translate. The sentences don't seem to flow together to give context. I can't even...
I don´t think it´s genetic, interesting essay I wasn´t sure where you were going with this one!
This is a very insightful topic. I hope my edits help. ^_^
I greatly enjoy the Kaiji anime and the manga. Have you watched the second season of the anime?
I won the bidding for a guitar yesterday. I started playing the guitar 10 years ago when I was still living in my hometown. I was very ...
Please rephrase some of your sentences. See you
Nice glasses Atsu...
Very good Atsu. Good luck
I did this fast so I might have missed some stuff, but I think I covered all the major things. Sorry about your job, hope everything wor...
You could have offered the fat girl some candy to carry the water for you! w
Atsu, I am encouraging you to express more what you feel. Have a good night. Shayne
I hope that someday you can share your dreams with the future generation. Just continue writing and I will review your Journals for co...
Hello Atsu, It was a nice experience and journey. Continue to write your journal here. Shayne
I didn't realise it took 7 hours to climb Mt. Fuji! Well done :D