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The season of cherry Blossom

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Apr 09th 2012 06:47
My daughter starts going to the kindergarden for the first semester.
She will come home before noon today.
So I have a plan.
We will go to nearby the park and then we have lunch and vew flower of cherry blossoms.
My friends and their children will go there.
I'm looking forward to seeing them.
smartspark
Apr 09th 2012 07:08
  • The season of cherry Blossom

  • The Season of Cherry Blossoms

 
  • My daughter starts going to the kindergarden for the first semester.

  • My daughter will starts going to the kindergarden for the first semester.

    Make sure to use the same tense.

 
  • We will go to nearby the park and then we have lunch and vew flower of cherry blossoms.

  • We will go to the nearby park, and then we have lunch and view the cherry blossoms.

 
  • My friends and their children will go there.

  • My friends and their children will go there.

    This is not wrong, but I would add "too" or "also."

 
Good plan :)
Apr 10th 2012 06:12 tohu
Hi,smartspark. Thanks for correcting. I had a good time yesterday.
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