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Jan 24th 2011 04:06
Hello^^

I want to introduce me as first dairy.

I'm yukileno.Graduate school student.

I am studying Pedagogy and Philosophy.

My subject of research is Philosophy for Children(P4C)program at Montclair University.

Is there anyone who were learned by that program?

I will go America to collect paper-research paper,book,and something in relation to....


and...

I love beer of foreign country.
Guinness,Heineken,Bass Pale Ale,The list goes on and on.


Have a great day!Thank you!
Tessa (テッサ)
Jan 24th 2011 04:31
  • I want to introduce me as first dairy.

  • I want to introduce me myself as in my first dairy.

 
  • Graduate school student.

  • A Ggraduate school student.

 
  • Is there anyone who were learned by that program?

  • Is there anyone who were learned by from that program?

 
  • I will go America to collect paper-research paper,book,and something in relation to....

  • I will go America to collect paper-research paper,books,and something in relation to....

 
  • I love beer of foreign country.

  • I love the beer of foreign country countries.

 
Good job!
Jan 25th 2011 05:25 yukileno
Thank you for your correct^^
Jan 24th 2011 05:21
  • I will go America!!!

  • I will go to America!!!

 
Jan 25th 2011 05:25 yukileno
Hello^^
Thank you☆
Earle
Jan 24th 2011 13:28
  • Is there anyone who were learned by that program?

  • Is there anyone who were learned by studied under that program?

 
  • I will go America to collect paper-research paper,book,and something in relation to....

  • I will go America to collect paper- research papers,books, and something in relation to....

 
Great introdution entry and I hope you have fun in your stay in the U.S. :)
Jan 25th 2011 05:20 yukileno
Thank you for your correct and encourage me^^
Scooter
Jan 25th 2011 06:36
  • I want to introduce me as first dairy.

  • I want to introduce me as myself in my first dairy diary entry.

 
Good luck with school!
Jan 26th 2011 06:32 yukileno
Thank you very much.
Rochila
Jan 25th 2011 08:18
  • I love beer of foreign country.

  • I love beer from foreign countries.

 
I love imported beer too!
Epescially New Zealand or Japanese beer, even though they both have really different tastes.
Jan 25th 2011 14:01
Go NZ beer :D! Monteiths?
Jan 25th 2011 14:28 Rochila
I love Tui the best. I know it's one of the cheapest but it's sooooo good compared to Australian beer.
Jan 26th 2011 06:37 yukileno
Japanese beer?Good☆
I love too^^
I would like to try NZ beer♪
arixion
Jan 27th 2011 09:10
  • I want to introduce me as first dairy.

  • I want to introduce me as myself for my first dairy.

 
  • My subject of research is Philosophy for Children(P4C)program at Montclair University.

  • My subject of research subject is Philosophy for Children(P4C)program at Montclair University.

 
Jan 29th 2011 11:21 yukileno
Thanks for your correct^^
Anya
Feb 14th 2011 07:21
  • I will go America!!!

  • I am going to America!!!

 
  • I want to introduce me as first dairy.

  • I want to introduce me as myself in my first dairy diary entry. (I agree with correction number 2.)

 
  • I'm yukileno.

  • I'm Yukileno.

 
  • Graduate school student.

  • A Ggraduate school student. (I agree with this correction.)

 
  • My subject of research is Philosophy for Children(P4C)program at Montclair University.

  • The subject of my research is Philosophy for Children (P4C) program at Montclair University. (Don't forget the spacing.)

 
  • Is there anyone who were learned by that program?

  • Is there anyone who has studied under that program?

 
  • I will go America to collect paper-research paper,book,and something in relation to....

  • I will go America to collect research papers, books, and things related to them.

 
  • and...

  • Also...

 
  • I love beer of foreign country.

  • I love beer from foreign countries. (I agree with this correction. You can also say "I love foreign beer.")

 
  • Guinness,Heineken,Bass Pale Ale,The list goes on and on.

  • Guinness, Heineken, Bass Pale Ale, the list goes on and on. (Spacing!)

 
  • Have a great day!Thank you!

  • Have a great day! Thank you! (Spacing.)

 
Good luck! I'm a teacher myself. ^_~
Feb 20th 2011 23:47 yukileno
Thanks so much!
Your correction is very simple and easy to understand^^
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