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Oct 18, 2012 00:40 made 31 corrections for Was machen Sie gern in Ihre...
Super. :) Ich mache immer gerne Sport, und gehe auch sehr oft mit Freunden zu Konzerten. Tanzen würde ich auch gerne mal machen, Street...
Oct 17, 2012 14:30 Sketchyfish made 11 corrections for I miss him
You have a beautiful personality. My advice is to stay in contact with him, and if you find you need each other, it will happen. :D
Aug 23, 2012 06:17 graham commented on Long time no see
I'm glad so many people think I'm cute haha! My new job gives me loads of time so you better learn to be a good tour guide!!
Aug 2, 2012 09:56 twopineappleshenhao made 10 corrections for Time to say goodbye
Excellent writing! 太好了! I thought the bread in Germany was incredible.
Jul 23, 2012 07:32 hitz made 18 corrections for Making friends from internet?
I live in Germany, too. Although my German skills leave a lot to be desired, I am very talkative and self-assured. I think that matters a...
Jul 9, 2012 08:04 mprure made 17 corrections for Hausaufgabe: Die Ausbildung...
Your grammar is quite ambitious! Good work!
Jul 7, 2012 07:35 Caira made 28 corrections for What could my bad German br...
I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions. Good luck with your problem!
Jul 7, 2012 07:00 astrophiliac made 26 corrections for Long time no see
I'm thinking about going to England next fall for college! It was very interesting to hear you and your friend's experience about...
Jul 7, 2012 06:42 made 5 corrections for Long time no see
Well everyone has their own opinions about different things.
Jun 25, 2012 22:35 Timi made 17 corrections for Das Drachenbootfest
Dear Altayana, I have tried to correct you text as good as possible and I hope I could help you a little bit. Best regards yours ...
Jun 25, 2012 19:53 Katrinmaria made 15 corrections for Das Mondfest
Achtung, nicht Mann und man verwechseln! Mann = maennliche Person, Gegenteil von Frau man = allgemeine, unbestimmte Form von "wi...
Jun 23, 2012 09:02 Julie made 25 corrections for Three months left
Very well done and you are a good writer! Please continue writing about your experiences.
May 23, 2012 00:32 Detlef made 30 corrections for Was ist los in Göttingen? Ü...
Es war interessant für mich. Hat allerdings auch eine ganze Menge Zeit gekostet. Mit Grüßen aus Berlin, Detlef!
Apr 30, 2012 07:43 van03 made 17 corrections for Hausaufgaben: wie möchetest...
Gut gemacht!
Apr 18, 2012 05:29 van03 made 14 corrections for Übug
Eine Szene, wie das Leben sie spielt. Es ist gut, uns Deutschen den Spiegel vorzuhalten.
Apr 14, 2012 00:14 Detlef made 69 corrections for Was ist der Unterschied?
Bitte daran denken, dass man Substantive im Deutschen groß schreibt.
Apr 13, 2012 22:01 Havoc made 7 corrections for Wie das Wetter in Taiwan?
Guter Text, nur ein paar kleine Fehler. Ist es im Sommer in Taiwan auch sehr schwül? War in einigen anderen asiatischen Ländern und ...
Apr 12, 2012 22:13 sindergi made 25 corrections for Eine traurige Reise
Sehr schön, also nicht die Situation mit deinem Freund, aber dein Deutsch war sehr gut. Achte nur ein bisschen auf die Vergangenheits...
Mar 25, 2012 20:54 graham made 28 corrections for My German class (2)
I think this is why I like to be in charge of my studying, native teachers are great and all but they didn't go through the same expe...
Mar 21, 2012 11:23 slufay made 33 corrections for My German class (2)
What an arrogant teacher!
Mar 19, 2012 11:10 Paul made 15 corrections for Warum ängert sich die Frau?
Ich verwende US keyboard. Bitte Vorsicht mit Umlauten in der Korrektur.
Mar 15, 2012 07:26 made 11 corrections for Rätsel raten-Wer ist sie?
Heidi Klum!
Mar 14, 2012 02:54 patbingsu made 18 corrections for My German class
Obviously, your English is really good. I know this was an informal post, but I still fixed some proper nouns that you didn't capital...
Mar 8, 2012 03:28 Reiki made 16 corrections for Mein Tag
Hahaha! Das kenne ich zu gut! = ) Dein Deutsch ist sehr gut - es sind nur kleine Fehler! Weiter so und viel Spaß beim Lernen!
Feb 1, 2012 03:28 graham made 21 corrections for My trip to Leipzig
Good to see you're making the most of your time there! How long until you have to go back to Taiwan?
Jan 31, 2012 11:40 Tobin commented on Eine Reise
Hi, Dein Text enthält fast in jedem Satz Fehler. Es ist recht mühsam, das Satz für Satz zu korrigieren. Hier eine umgeschriebene Version:...
Jan 8, 2012 06:51 Trink made 21 corrections for My vacation (2)
You use 'actually' a lot. It's used in situations like this (sorry I don't know how to explain :/): 'He's a co...
Jan 8, 2012 06:49 Mkauz made 26 corrections for My vacation (2)
Don't give up Altayana, you'll find the perfect guy!
Jan 8, 2012 06:08 Vegeance commented on My vacation(1)
Your english is very good. I just noted some expressions / changes in blue and red for corrections made (that were relevant to spelling, ...
Dec 20, 2011 18:31 Brendan commented on New life
Hi Altayana. Interesting to read your journal entries. I teach English in NZ and most of my students are from mainland China. I dare not ...
Dec 5, 2011 20:58 deliza made 17 corrections for Berlin sehen
Du solltest mehr auf die Satzstrukturen achten. Hier liegen die meisten Fehler. Wichtig ist vor allem, dass das Verb nach dem Nomen kom...
Dec 5, 2011 20:40 made 18 corrections for Berlin sehen
Es ist nicht klar, ob die Party bereits stattgefunden hat oder ob sie erst später stattfinden wird.
Dec 5, 2011 09:25 graham made 21 corrections for New life (2)
哈哈, 女人~~~,你在berlin做什么,我听说那里很好玩。
Dec 5, 2011 04:05 George made 7 corrections for New life (2)
I only corrected some of it. Pretty good with only minor mistakes.
Nov 9, 2011 03:40 graham made 11 corrections for New life
Good to hear you are getting on alright! How's the food there?
Nov 8, 2011 08:47 Krii made 20 corrections for New life
Your English is good compared to the others that I have corrected.
Jul 27, 2011 10:41 Wolf made 7 corrections for Lazy life
You can handle it. First impressions usually don't matter much in the long run anyways. ^^ I hope you have a lot of fun. Enjoy! 我祝你一...
Jul 9, 2011 02:17 schoenewaelder made 15 corrections for I am going to Germany
Don't worry! I don't think asians have any serious problems in Germany, but of course it's wise to be careful, and there i...
May 29, 2011 00:05 graham made 13 corrections for Depressed
Hope you're feeling a bit more optimistic now, take care.
May 13, 2011 02:05 graham made 13 corrections for interview quiz (5)
How does 1096 work, 老师?
May 5, 2011 03:50 graham made 14 corrections for A small world
Wow, cool coincidence!
May 3, 2011 20:10 graham made 11 corrections for my life
I feel so bad for you partying and socialising all the time, it sounds tough:P
Apr 27, 2011 22:46 graham made 7 corrections for interview quiz(4)
加油!kommen sie zu Deutschland!
Apr 27, 2011 22:11 graham made 16 corrections for interview quiz (3)
Your practice sessions are paying off, so I will join in with the ritual "your English is very good" :P much better than some p...
Apr 24, 2011 04:14 Luscious Mo made 33 corrections for My weekend
very good English!!
Apr 23, 2011 05:34 Morganic made 11 corrections for interview quiz (2)
Overall, it looks very good! I think you ended the second one fine. Good luck!
Apr 23, 2011 03:11 Joseph made 10 corrections for interview quiz
Good luck on your interview!
Apr 20, 2011 07:06 graham made 26 corrections for Bad Romance (2)
Lot's on your mind today!
Apr 20, 2011 04:13 Tom made 22 corrections for Bad Romance (1)
Good job! Too bad you had that experience. But you can learn from it. Meantime, your English is good, and you only have a few details ...
Apr 20, 2011 04:12 クリス made 14 corrections for Bad Romance (1)
I hope your luck becomes better. :/