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Feb 17, 2011 17:06
Art is deeply related to human life.

He is still in his early twenties, but he looks old for his age.

My senior said, "Please visit me at your convenience."

Why don't you take a walk to relax?

I'd appreciate it if you could correct the preceding sentences or give me some advice.