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Feb 14, 2012 17:35
You can't be 100% sure who wrote this article, but the evidence we had supports our hypothesis that he is its writer.

There has been no way to confirm who wrote this article, but the evidence we collected supports our hyphothesis that he is its writer.





I've translated one Japanese sentence into two English sentences. Which do you think is better? Or how do you think I should correct them? I'd appreciate it if you could correct my English and give me some advice. Thank you very much in advance.