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Jan 06th 2011 13:47
I am now having several jackets because cold days came .
I like wearing jackets .It makes me comfortable .
The blue one of these is thin and light .I could use even fall and spring season.
I can change a feeling when I change jackets. So I chosen jackets before wearing these.

I try to uplode photos of these .An iPhone of internet dosent work . So I will try again . When My laptop bring me back:)

T-J-
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 06th 2011 14:53
  • I am now having several jackets because cold days came .

  • I am now having several jackets because cold days have come.

 
  • I like wearing jackets .

  • I like wearing jackets because they make me comfortable.

 
  • It makes me comfortable .

  • It makes me comfortable .

 
  • The blue one of these is thin and light .

  • The blue one of these is thin and light. (Lets see the picture ~_~)Without a picture, it would be: My blue one of these is thin and light.

 
  • I could use even fall and spring season.

  • I could even use use even them for fall and spring season.

 
  • I can change a feeling when I change jackets.

  • (Each jacket has it's own feeling.)?

 
  • So I chosen jackets before wearing these.

  • So I chosen jackets before wearing these.何と言いたかったですか。

 
  • I try to uplode photos of these .

  • I'll try to upload photos of these.

 
  • An iPhone of internet dosent work .

  • The internet on my iPhone isn't working(right now?)

 
  • So I will try again .

  • So I will try again when I have my laptop：）

 
  • When My laptop bring me back:)

  • When My laptop bring me back:)

 
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Kaytaro
Jan 06th 2011 16:29
wow.. I have so many mistake =(
But You are very helpful for my english. Thanks !

あと物ってTheyでも表現できるんですね。今さながら（笑）
微妙なニュアンスが難しいです。
Jan 06th 2011 19:27 T-J-
Yeah, there can be a lot of little things that are easy to miss. しんぱいしないで、英語は難しいかもしれないけど、英語は無理じゃありません。Just takes time... like my japanese... ~_~
hiker joe
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 06th 2011 18:27
  • I am now having several jackets because cold days came .

  • I 'm now looking at several jackets that are in my closet to wear because the cold weather now is here..

 
  • I like wearing jackets .

  • It's now necessary to wear a jacket because of the cold weather..

 
  • It makes me comfortable .

  • My jacket keeps me warm while I'm outside.

 
Jan 06th 2011 18:38 Kaytaro
Thanks your big help. Hiker Joe :)
Jan 06th 2011 18:55 hiker joe
I'll try to add more corrections for you , but it is work time for me now
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