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I like your tears which are like grass and I like to see your smile.

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Jun 29th 2012 00:09
I like your tears which are like grass and I like to see your smile.
I think that anyone likes smile exactly.
So you always show your smile, and you are always smiling even so you are sad.
I’m always doing effort for people around me, you know?
I want to most people have to show their smile.
However, on second thought, a lot of children who have no parents.
They are always looking for food and take care of their siblings.
I think that they are poor thing and they lost their emotion.
That’s why I pray that they will get free time and have their dream.
If they have dream, it is starting point of them.
However I don’t know that how to they have dream.
They will even alive only.
What do you think of it?
The world somehow that support to life.
I hope it!
Brillantel
Jun 29th 2012 00:58
  • I like your tears which are like grass and I like to see your smile.

  • I like your tears that look like glass and like to see you smile.

    ガラス? Did you mean glass? because grass is like the green stuff in a field....

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  • I like your tears which are like grass and I like to see your smile.

  • I like your tears which are like glass and like to see your smile.

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  • I think that anyone likes smile exactly.

  • I think that everyone likes to smile.

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  • So you always show your smile, and you are always smiling even so you are sad.

  • So you always smile, and are always smiling even when you are sad.

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  • I’m always doing effort for people around me, you know?

  • I’m always making an effort for the people around me, you know?

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  • I want to most people have to show their smile.

  • I want most people have a smile on their face.

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  • They are always looking for food and take care of their siblings.

  • are always looking for food and taking care of their siblings.

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  • That’s why I pray that they will get free time and have their dream.

  • That’s why I pray that they will have time to chase their own dreams.

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  • If they have dream, it is starting point of them.

  • Having a dream, is a starting point for them.

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  • However I don’t know that how to they have dream.

  • However I don’t know if they will be able to chase their dreams.

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  • They will even alive only.

  • They only live once.

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  • What do you think of it?

  • What do you think about this?

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  • The world somehow that support to life.

  • The world that somehow supports life.

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  • I hope it!

  • I wish for it!

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I think people need to adopt more and reproduce less..... Sounds harsh but imagine living your whole life in an orphanage or a foster home. People get separated from their brothers and sisters and that's really sad.
Jun 30th 2012 06:43 Sen
Thank you very much for everything!
Matthew
Jun 29th 2012 01:36
  • I think that anyone likes smile exactly.

  • I think that anyone likes to smile exactly.

 
  • However, on second thought, a lot of children who have no parents.

  • However, on second thought, a lot of children who have no parents.

 
  • They are always looking for food and take care of their siblings.

  • They are always looking for food to take care of their siblings.

 
  • I think that they are poor thing and they lost their emotion.

  • I think that they are poor things and they lost their emotion.

 
  • If they have dream, it is starting point of them.

  • If they have dreams, it is a starting point of them.

 
  • However I don’t know that how to they have dream.

  • However I don’t know that how to they will have dreams.

 
  • They will even alive only.

  • They will be alive only.

 
Jun 30th 2012 06:43 Sen
Thank you very much for everything!
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