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When you will come to my heart?

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Jan 27th 2012 22:15
I lost my word anywhere; it was in the wind which throws my face yesterday.
I lost my tears anywhere; it was in my dream which I saw last night.
I don’t think that our talking express our love.

When you will come to my heart?
You let me that I am crazy about you and I can’t sleep.
I hold you with my body.
It causes our fell in lobe and starts our love.

I will change my heart and I alive for you.
SnowGua
Jan 27th 2012 22:20
  • When you will come to my heart?

  • When you will come into my heart?

 
  • I don’t think that our talking express our love.

  • I don’t think that our conversations expresses our love.

 
  • When you will come to my heart?

  • When you will come into my heart?

 
  • You let me that I am crazy about you and I can’t sleep.

  • You make me crazy about you that I can't fall asleep.

 
  • I hold you with my body.

  • I embrace you.

 
  • It causes our fell in lobe and starts our love.

  • It causes us to fall in love and starts it again.

 
  • I will change my heart and I alive for you.

  • I will change my heart and I live for you.

 
"When will you come into my heart?" This statment is kinda contradicting as I feel that she IS in your heart, but YOU aren't in her heart. XD
L22
Jan 28th 2012 01:20
  • When you will come to my heart?

  • When will you come to my heart?

 
  • I lost my word anywhere; it was in the wind which throws my face yesterday.

  • I lost my words; they were in the wind which yesterday blew against my face .

 
  • I lost my tears anywhere; it was in my dream which I saw last night.

  • I lost my tears; they were in my dreams last night.

 
  • I don’t think that our talking express our love.

  • I don’t think that our conversations express our love adequately.

 
  • When you will come to my heart?

  • When will you come to my heart?

 
  • You let me that I am crazy about you and I can’t sleep.

  • You leave me crazy about you and I can’t sleep.

 
  • I hold you with my body.

  • I hold you with my body.

 
  • It causes our fell in lobe and starts our love.

  • We fall in love through the contact and renew our bond.

 
  • I will change my heart and I alive for you.

  • I will change my heart and live for you.

 
Your endings are always so beautiful. You are very talented. Do you write Japanese poems as well?
Jan 28th 2012 04:34 Sen
Thank you very much for everything!
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